|Reviews for The Player|
| The Hopeful Komaeda chapter 27 . 3/24
I have to say this was a not bad fic. I read it through the end and was satisfied with the ending. I also read the aftermath and I enjoyed it to some extent. I have some good things to say and some negative things.
Your writing was good enough to be readable, though the transitions were bad as I think you should've put up lines instead of a simple "X".
The plot was interesting at the beginning...before it became kinda predictably boring. Some of the things that happened that should've been a surprise, didn't even surprise me at the end of the story.
Because I don't know how many times Amy and Sonic broke up and got together again and again.
The other thing is some of the characters are WAY WAAAAY out of character. I know this is an AU (even thought you didn't specify it), but some of the characters are way to out of hand.
All of the characters, (mostly Amy) are all over-dramatic and are overreacting to the little things people say to them. Like when Sonic talked to Chuck.
And so ends my review.
May the hope shine bright within you.
| Guest chapter 29 . 3/9
i cant believe this was finished in 2011
almost 4 years later and I still think about it... a LOT
I love it so much sosoososossoso much, bless
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/11
This is a good story so far!
| sandypickle chapter 27 . 2/7
1000th Review :D
| sandypickle chapter 1 . 2/7
I absolutely love this story, i have read it so many times
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/30
Reminds me of my grandad's funeral
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/30
Loved it when she trashed Fiona
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/27
Nice words. How do you like them apples is what I mean. Funnya
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
| that guy chapter 1 . 1/7
dude i read the entire thing and i have to say this is one of the most in depth fan fiction i have ever read, amazing.
| Nala64 chapter 24 . 1/3
| Guest chapter 27 . 12/31/2014
Absolutley loved it. Great job.
| Sonicrocks456 chapter 29 . 12/29/2014
there once was a amazing author...
who work compared to others it would slaughter,
but there was also a boy who would scream...
C'MON BRO GIMME TAIREAM!
to which the author agreed,
with satisfaction guaranteed!
yet not sonic x canon,don't do that PLEASE!
I'm begging you!I'M ON MY KNEES!
cosmo,as we both know,is a freaking dread.
everyone knows she's better off dead!
All i request is it not to be a lemon.
make them their proper age, it'll be like a story from heaven.
so please grant the wish, of a boy named Evan. (which is me!)
| MissMJS chapter 29 . 12/25/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY! ADORABLE!
Fiona wasn't as bad as I thought, and Sonic is too pig-headed for his own good! Great job, like seriously, fantastic job!
| Guest chapter 29 . 11/13/2014
i loved it!