Reviews for Broken Ties
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Well done.
Piole chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Aw, poor Perce...this is a great fic. Truly original take in Perces origins.

Thanks for sharing.
AzarDarkstar chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
This is such a promising concept, and I'm sad that you have yet to continue. I admit a certain fondness for Perceptor, despite the fact that he is so often ignored. I do hope that you write more on this story. In fact, I look forward to it.

Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
So when will Perceptor spill the beans?
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Nice story, and nice reasoning on why Perceptor isn't running around using all of his modes/abilities.
Shadow Vision chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
WOW, this fic was amazing! I would love to see it continued as more than a one shot. Perhaps Ratchet and Wheeljack's reactions and a confrontation with Megatron in battle where Perceptor finally is forced to reveal what he truly is capable of!
Shaymayca1 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Excellent story, It was well paced and easy to read. (perceptor centered fics tend to be mind-boggling wordy) I hope you plan on continuing this, I would like to see where you(and your beta) could take this.
actionmoviefan1 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Just awesome...can't wait for more
kirin-saga chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Oh wow! You did an excellent job with this bunny!

Poor Perceptor! Having Megatron and Soundwave as his creators. I wonder when Megatron will reveal Perceptor's secret and how much damage it will do.

I'm glad Finehold got captured, because if he hadn't Perceptor would still be with the Decepticons. Well, actually, he'd most likely be dead by know.

I'm glad Ratchet and Wheeljack will let him tell them in his own time, even if Ratchet had to snoop first. And Wheeljack's reaction to Ratchet's snooping was funny.

I love this so much... and I hope you're considering a sequel.
fin chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Oh My God! This story makes so much sense that it's almost scary, so update Please!
kitkat chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Finally, a fic starring Perceptor and a possibility about his past.

Perceptor is my favorite character so I'm very happy about this fic and it shows Perceptor in a different light. That and it had a lot of sparkling Perceptor which I never see a lot of.
Carmilla DeWinter chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Interesting take on an often ignored character, and you're actually making a frightening amount of sense.
Prime Revolver chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Wow, that was really cool and very well done. My fav scientists to! I look forward to see how this comes out!


oh and i wouldn't mind reading the conv. if you don't mind:)
Elita One chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
wow Percy is a strong one

dealing with all that
Misao-CG chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
ó.ò Ep! My mother's instints are kicking in! óOò Poor Percy! ::Bear Hugs Perceptor:: NO fair, no fair, so curious and with sich an atrocious childhood! ;o; The poor bot has a lot of ghost to deal with. ::keeps Bear Hugging Perceptor::

ó.o It was a really sad story, but it was wonderfully written. You played the character nicely and keep it real. Congratulations!

Here, Have a cookie for you, and an energon-cookie for Percy. n.n Just Baked them!


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