Reviews for Best Laid Plans
IzzyHollick chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
I really really liked it
Marikalay chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Tori's dad ambushing her with a blind date who happened to be her boyfriend's brother was hilarious. Well done.
TenyumeKasumi chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is great! LOL Blake vs. Tori's Dad! THIS should have been the final boss fight of the series. xD
deepsrani chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This is great!

I love the Tori/Blake and the side of Kira/Trent and Marah/Dustin
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Nice. Catch ya on the flip side.
Oyako-sama being lazy chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
CUTE! :D
The Violent Tomboy chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
...awe...

so cute...

Lovely shot. Gotta love daddy -
BCookkiieee chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
This is an awesome one shot! Really sweet and super funny! I loved it!

Tory
Hieiko chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Oh, this was marvelously entertaining. Great work! :)
ThunderRiver411 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Nice story. I'm working on one to. Check it out when you have time.
GavinDarklighter chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
*laugh*

That's a great story, you wrote the whole situation pretty good, it was humorous, but also serious, never ridicolous.

I liked the way you are describing Tori's father and what he is doing to his daugther out of love. I mean, it's no excuse, but somehow understandable, he isn't the only father in the world, who is doing everything to protect his daugther, perhaps a bit too much after all...

But I really liked the way you wrote and decribed Tori, Hunter, Blake and the others. It was so like them. Blake being scared of an annoyed Trent was really funny *g* The whole picture story was pretty funny, that's a great idea. Especially with everyones reaction *g*

The proposal of Blake was really cute and perfect. Certainly like nothing he planed before, but... cute :) I felt a bit sorry for her father, first his arranged date for Tori turns out to be the brother of her boyfriend, then the boyfriend proposed to her in front of him.

And I love the ending! Tori's mother is really symphatic, she is a lot like her daugther, I think. She reminds me much of her in her attitude.

A great story :)
BlueDolphinz chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
i loved it! so cool! it's a great idea, i love blake/tori. Awesome story!
writeallnight chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I could not stop laughing! This was wonderful, I absolutely loved it!
Pontiger27 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
i absoulutly luv it u wre right u are a big blake/tori fan huh lol. i will have to remember that
kamenzie chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
u should write another story about the wedding!
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