|Reviews for Accidentally Going: A Brenna Jones Story|
| Pyra Sanada chapter 29 . 11/7/2013
| Pyra Sanada chapter 15 . 11/7/2013
So very proud of how she handled talking to the pair once she got back!
| Pyra Sanada chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
Hah! I loved that last line! It's interesting so far! I got here from the newer one you wrote, but decide to take your advice in the author's note about reading this one first. Can't wait to read the rest and then move on to the newer one!
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Update immediately, please!
| Archer83 chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
Okay... Kirk and Brenna are definitely even now for him kissing her by force. THAT had to be one hell of a surprise when good ol' Tiberius tried to 'engage in negotiations' with the alien woman. XD
| Archer83 chapter 5 . 2/11/2013
Well damn, that didn't take long! It looks like revenge is a dish best served... with feathers and honey. That, and an endless sonic shower... If I were Brenna, I'd be scared of my impending collective payback too. XD
Wow... I think James managed to surprise Brenna after all, and I just realized why he's has been more of a jerk than usual when speaking to her. It's simple really, James T Kirk likes to think of himself as the master of his own fate / destiny, then along comes this woman who seems to know way too much about him and his crew. I can see why he'd be threatened by that, maybe even be a little afraid of her knowledge.
I'm kind of hoping Brenna does something with her knowledge, even a small compassionate act, which shows Kirk that having her around can be a positive thing as well.
| Archer83 chapter 4 . 2/11/2013
LOL! Pranking the officers and crew of the Enterprise... Is Brenna absolutely nuts?! Apparently, yes... yes she is. I sure hope that wont come back to haunt her anytime soon...
| Archer83 chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
I'm starting to think that Brenna might be a bad influence on poor completely innocent Bones. ;)
You writing is so well thought out and professional that this story feels more like a published Star Trek novel than a fan fic.
| Archer83 chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
I loved this chapter, and how incredibly funny it was! Messing with Spock's hair and getting fall down drunk with McCoy... two things Brenna can check off on her 'Things I Absolutely Must Do Since I'm Stuck Here Anyway' list. :)
| Archer83 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
As an avid fan of all things Star Trek related, as well as Self Insert stories, I just wanted to tell you how amazingly awesome this story is! I would say that I'm sorry I missed this when you were writing it originally, but that would be a big damn lie since now I can read this baby cover to cover! I can not tell you how excited that prospect makes me, along with catching up on the sequel your currently writing. :)
| Larka-chan chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
Ha! I love where this is going! You're an amazing writer miss :)
| Larka-chan chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
This is priceless! I adore this so much! It's funny! It's sweet! It's unique! I could go on all day,
| Larka-chan chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This is extraordinary! I absolutely love everything about this! Your writing style is so professional and all the characters are acting just as I would imagine they would! Amazing job! You inspired me!
| LilaRiddle chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
I love this story I have read it twice now and I will be reading it again and again I have it bookmarked. I really identify with brenna being an ice cream and star trek addict myself. I have always wanted to be on the star ship (I do in my dreams) like this and the adventures brenna has everything is perfect except James and Patricia I don't like them :) please keeping writing this could be a whole series I'd love to see that
| CleopatraMinusAntony chapter 30 . 1/21/2011
SO I read this story way, way back when you first wrote it, as you were publishing it chapter by chapter. I remember eagerly anticipating each new addition. And then somewhere down the line I realized that you had re-written it... and here I am, completely re-reading your story... and enjoying it immensely.
It certainly did not suffer in the editing; in fact, I feel that the editing gave even more strength and consistency to Brenna's character and clarified her relationships with the other characters from TOS. The whole story has a polish and reads well. Each chapter builds on the previous one, adding to and complementing what came before without obviously setting up the situation for the next chapter.
I also like that you developed Brenna's relationship to Kirk and changed her interaction with Tovak. The part where Kirk called Brenna a hypocrite completely blindsided me- I was not prepared for that at all and it upset me that he would call her that... and that he would be RIGHT. You gracefully handled their interactions... and you made me hate Q. Nearly, I think, as much as Brenna did at that moment.
You are a good story teller- and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.