This is my favorite story, i read it at least once a year!

You know, you could have made this story so much more accessible had you not made the main pairing a pedophilic relationship. Kakashi is 14 years older than her, 16 is still a child, I don't care what the "age of consent" is across most of the world, a child is a child. If you were to bump her age up to 21, that would fix this fic instantly and make it readable.

As it stands, you probably put off a lot of readers just because of the nonsensical choice to make her 16.

that abortion crap pmo. keep your probirth shit out of fanfic

This was soooooo amazing! Thank you for sharing!

lol oh man the ending of this chapter lol just dang, awesome. it's a funny story so far for those who are checking the reviews

genma you are an evil genius.

This story kept me up for days. I won't lie, it started out a little.. unhinged in its tone. More humor than plot. But I'm more than happy that I kept with the plot. I won't say that at the beginning I skipped a couple plot lines with side characters to only read the build up with SakuxKaka and skimming to make sure that I didn't miss any pertinent plot lines, but I watched your dialogue evolve. I watched the plot evolve. I will also admit that I am remiss that we didn't get just /one/ more sex scene with the two of them making up. You absolutely built up the tension with Kakashi talking about Jiraiya's prose and the build up of tension for the two sex scenes in the novel. So I have to admit, you left out just one.. I will be scowering your writers page to make sure I haven't missed a one shot. Thank you for your diligence and mastery in storytelling. You've given me a wonderful outlet from reality and I've appreciated it so much.

My genuine thanks.
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It was so steamy not to do

Ok, so let me get this straight. No one can see Sakura stealing, because she’s just so big of a goody two shoes that it seems like a cardinal sin. Yet they can see her attempting to seduce him like that doesn’t have even more moral compunctions.

Sakura also just conveniently forgets that she has a brain for a second and gets manipulated by Ino’s obvious ploy of using her anger to get her to agree, and then being too prideful to take it back.

What a plot twist

This is such an amazing story. I never wanted it to end.

Disgusting prolife moment in this chapter, actually made me feel sick

tres bonne histoire :)

This was incredible beyond words. Thank you for this!

*slow clap, wipes tears, standing ovation* that was wonderful.

Amazing