|Reviews for Opperation: NO DECOMMISSION|
| Girl-of-Action chapter 14 . 11/6/2014
This is really good! Amber I can happy say is a healthy character, not a mary-sue in the least. Accomplished, definitely. But not overly so, she has her faults! The teens suddenly breaking into song was pretty funny, and I love the love/hate relationship between the teens and kids.I also think its very good how mixed canon and OC characters together so the readers have both a send of familiarity and something new. Its to bad you haven't updated for so long, I hope you change your mind and come back to it!
| Terminator101 chapter 14 . 7/5/2009
Anax Smith the Second is also a master of hidden wepons and a robotic Scientist and a healer he created cyborgs that he made in his knd time but there hidden in a base under the Atlantis Resort and the receptionist has the base key and he finds the receptionist stabed 4 times in the chest by Numbuh 4 blade and anax heals the receptionist wounds and orgens and takes his key and walks to Amber's room number and knock at the door
| vampirella chapter 14 . 7/2/2009
OMG O_O I'm so worry and so exitec, they will notice that Amber and Nigel are together in the aquadventure and they will think the worst! oh 86 will be so happy but what about if he confess? that is not gonna change nothing, or yes? my godness what a great chapter, it's all like A Series of Unfortunate Events xxD I really like your story see yah
| vampirella McHany chapter 13 . 6/20/2009
it was time that you update (see who talks xxD), I really like this chapter, grandpa was very funny "monty wont be late" and monty do this monty do that xxD but I think amber is complaining too much, what is her problem with second class? any way I like how things are going, the KND mad about lulls in battles and all because a family holidays xxD I like it keep it on
| vampirella McHany chapter 12 . 1/22/2009
hey, this look great, maybe too many new characters and maybe your are too descriptive but the relationship between Nigel and her cousin is very interesting I think you're doing a great job, keep it on
| Terminator101 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
CAN Anax SMITH THE 2ND AND Amber GETS MARRED
| Terminator101 chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
HI CAN YOU PUT MY character
NAME: Anax SMITH THE 2ND
CODENAME: COMPUTER VIRUS
KND Number: 9090
PROFILE: HE CRUPES COMPUTERS BY INSTALING A COMPUTER VIRUS HIS MIND IS HIGHLY ENCRYPTED LIKE A COMPUTER THAY TRYED TO decommissioning HIM BUT IT FAILED AND IT BLEW UP THE MACHIEN.
Physical Appearance: white with a small tan and blond hair but dyed red. He has very nice light blue eyes
and he’s very attractive, and he has a really nice muscular figure.
Clothes: white shirt and blue jeans with bloodstains on them.
Personality: He’s very nice to Amber AND NEVER BETRAYS HER!ALSO HES AN EXPERT AT FINDING OUT IF SOMEONE IS A SPY AND IF Amber GETS HURT OR SICK HE WILL HELP HER GET BETTER AND HE HAS A LICENSE TO DRIVE AND KILL
| deleted2012 chapter 12 . 1/8/2009
wait- so is jessica really spying on amber, or just swaying that?
| deleted2012 chapter 8 . 11/14/2008
this jessica person seems a bit suspicuous
| deleted2012 chapter 7 . 10/16/2008
uh-huh, uh-huh... YAY
hyperness. anyway, please update soon
| deleted2012 chapter 6 . 8/23/2008
the guy doesnt even seem to feel guilty for betraying the KND
but after writing so much on Amber, im kinda on herside now... :)
| deleted2012 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
hey, do the others know that amber is nigel's cousin? if not, when the truth leaks out, perhaps they can accuse him of keeping secrets, and stop trusting him so much. They may even slowly suspect he has something to do with the recent failing missions. of course, its up to you on whether you want to take my suggestion, and if you do, whether or not you'd like to make nigel a traitor or not.
3 things - I like amber's character, she seems interesting, keep it up!
- Um, Is her name Amber or Milady?
- I really like the hidden 3 and 4 ness. When number 4 is all angry because Amber hurt kuki, that was very good.
Also, perhaps in the beginning of the next chapter, you could do a list of people on board? it gets a bit confusing as to who is who and how old they are. is sector V still 10 or are they 11, 12, 13? If they are 12, maybe one of them has to get decommissioned sooner, and they escape to Amber? Just a thought, I don't think that would flow to much, though. Unless it is Nigel.