|Reviews for Seven Sins|
| HoldOnTight28 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I really liked it! You captured Jasper before Alice very well. The darkness was very true to his character. Well done.
| Sammeh-K chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I agree with you. I think that Jasper would be very angsty and dark before he met our beloved Alice!
I liked this Fic alot, it was just fantastic!
Keep up the great work.
| DestanyRose chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Wow! I can totally see Jasper being like that prior to Alice. This reminds me of Edward in the book about this teen age rebel time. At least Jasper killed the right person. I love the dark side to this story. Scary I know. Can't want to read more.
| 7Lucky7 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Is it bad to say that i really liked your darker story? I think of jasper being a darker character before he met Alice and i think it makes the goodness in him now more impressive. But i also liked that even tho he was being more of a monster he still wasnt entirely evil because in a way he was protecting the children, he could have killed the children but no he went for the priest i think it says a lot about Jasper as a character and i liked it! Yet again im impressed!
btw your not going to hell! If you are for that story then shit im trouble!
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I can picture Jasper like this before his conscience got the better of him. Good job.
| dumbface chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
whoa...that was really deep
| EdwardsKitten chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I do enjoy the dark stories and that was a good one.
| Masochisim chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Wow...that was amazing. (Can you tell that i like that word today?) Very dark, very nice.
| GroovyExcel chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
| MonkeyMojo chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
No, you're not going to Hell... maybe taking a walk past Hell on your way, but not directly there...:P
Poor Jasper... Icky priest... Ick... Kill him Jazzy, KILL HIM.
| JKlynn chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
that was amazing.
i totally agree with your opinion of Pre-Jasper.
i hope that you dont get any rude mail for this, there is a warning. and only a story. It's not the only one out there that a priest dies so don't feel bad.
ps: i find myself rather amusing right now: go to a catholic school. im not religious but im still finding my self ironic.
anyhow great on-shot.
you know what would be cool, if you made a story of pre-alice Jasper. like until he meets her. that would be pretty amazing. i need someone to fill that gap in.
| makesh1ftwings chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
oh so dark. i kind of like it.
i think it's rather accurate for what Jasper could be
i'm not sure he would bother with a priest, to drink his blood i mean.
i would expect him to just kill him.
| musically challenged chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
it was awsome.. kinda reminded me of how edward killed criminals and horrible people during his rebellious stage... Nice!
| icefang7 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
woha girl!this is awsome! i really love it..jasper did a good thing! eclipse told us he had a very dark past, this certainly is a very good posability! you are the master!
| Gwynhwyfer chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Ok, that was really dark. You're right.
But I like it nevertheless. I'm not offended with a Jasper who tortures someone who likes to do "nasty things" with children.
So, go on Jasper! Yay!