|Reviews for Superwomen of Eva: Emerald Fury|
| The Sinful chapter 17 . 10/6
Asuka might think she has a good reason for the way she acts, but right now she'd be lucky if Misato breaks her legs. Because the alternative is She-Hulk sodomizing her with them
| The Sinful chapter 16 . 10/5
There better be an exchange where Maya tells Misato to get angry and she responds, "That's my secret, Cap. I'm always angry."
Also if/when they finally have sex, Misato making a joke about Shinji "smashing" her
| James Birdsong chapter 24 . 9/24
| Quathis chapter 24 . 9/14
Yeah, not that easy to get rid of She-Hulk. Asuka may like red as a color, but a red She-Hulk likely wouldn't be helping the situation. Even Shinji might not be able to calm She-Hulk down fast enough to stop some carnage. Until next time.
| Traitor of All Traitors chapter 24 . 9/4
You going to make it so that Misato sees the She-Hulk as a cure instead of a disease? Like in Endgame?
| fictionelement777 chapter 24 . 9/4
Was kinda hoping for lilith's herald, but, this is good to. 9/10 (lack of action this chapter)
| Belthasar chapter 24 . 9/4
As expected, the cure has failed. I really wonder what side effects this will have though.
| Universe38 chapter 23 . 7/29
I'm actually starting to like this story. The way you awaited Misato's transformation to She-Hulk for the first time, much better than Nescaro's Evahulk story by 10000%, the detailed fights, the slowly developed relationship between Misato and Shinji, and the addition of Titania and Absorbing Woman for She-Hulk to battle. Makes me wish I was this detailed with chapters instead of making my stories detailed one-shots. Speaking of which I had an Omake of mine involving Asuka Shikinami, that is if you want to see it.
Of course I am a little curious on how you'll manage to make a developed romance between Ritsuko and Maya in this story.
| Raidentensho chapter 23 . 6/18
not bad at all. though, when the purge or Ionic wash suggested to stabilize Misato occurs, will it lead to her Transforming into a more compact and smarter Grey version?(from the cartoon series from season 3 or 4) also will 'The Leader' take part in this via Gendo or his vice commander? looking forward to more. until then, later!
| Dome of Bones chapter 23 . 5/10
I know I've never been one to ever pipe up in regards to this story in the past (though I have left one other review before this one), but I sincerely cannot express how much this fanfic and the others in the series have inspired me.
As much as I find the concept somewhat ludicrous now that I'm older, I have been following this story for nearly as long as Chapter 17. Now only was it the thing that introduced me to Eva, as I did in fact watch the entire series to even understand who these character were and what the fucc was even happening, but it also has inspired me to become a writer myself on this website. In fact, I would go as far as to name you THE reason I am even making fics today.
As for the Chapter itself, even though it juggles a far more silly concept that most of the others that came before it, you still manage to somehow strangely fit the whole insanity of superhero comics into the gritty, realistically cynical world of Eva, and that...I still do not get it how you manage to do it, but the story is all the better for it.
All in, congrats to you dude for continuing to go for so long without ever abandoning this story as so many do during the years (more than 10, holy shet). Keep doing what you do, and stay awesome.
| eastWOLF chapter 23 . 5/6
Aw yeah the U-Foes and Doc Samson, this is classic marvel stuff, I love it! Keep up the good work Orion! And no need to apologize take your time and take care of yourself!
Ritsuko gearing up to turn herself into Titania and the pieces for Maya to become a villain are falling into place. I can't to see what happens! I'm so here for muscle bound ladies duking it out, the more the merrier!
Also, I know you're not too fond of Kaji so it's interesting to see him as the new Opt. Director. Although Fuyutsuki has a point about keeping the people who knows about Misato's secret to a minimum. Kaji made a dark joke about being next in line to turn into a monster, I wonder who he would transform into?
| Quathis chapter 23 . 4/25
The good Doctor was able to negotiate quite well. Sampson would be good at helping others to see a better way in this circumstance. Misato having pounded most of them into near submission was a good bargaining stance to go from.
Maya's character arc also is getting much more interesting, with her being closer to herself while still somewhat corrupted by her power. Or the guilt, Gendo's machinations, and not even going into the raw fear she must be going through because of all this. How she comes back, if she comes back at all, will be fun to see, at the least.
Until next time.
| Traitor of All Traitors chapter 23 . 4/24
You going to use the Neogenic Recombinator to restore Misato to normal?
| Panther-Strife chapter 23 . 4/24
Wow you updated very fast...praises on to you. Well Maya got a body upgrade and she...well...at least she felt really good while she transformed. I hope that Gendo suffers for the crimes he has committed and that Misato punches him in her she-Hulk form. So will Chihiro become Red She-Hulk and Ritsuko becoming Titania?
Also could you please try another story about 7 Eva women becoming Stan Lee's Mighty 7 hero's along with deciding on who do you want to become the new Maggie Nelson/Mosaic?
And I am wondering if shinji will get spider power's in your Treacherous Web story? Like say that he gets a combination of Peter Parker, Miles Morales, May "Mayday" Parker's power's? That way Ritsuko can train him and they can further fall in love with each other.
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/24
Nice chapter though I admittedly haven't really been keeping up with the story for a long while. -_-;;; I had a wild idea of giving Shinji pheromone powers like Stacey X or Wallflower instead of going hulk. That'd allow him to make people like him or make threats leave him alone- for a while at least - amongst other things :p