|Reviews for Alan's Fears|
| Math Girl chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Awww... that was wonderful, and the ending was a warm and gorgeous surprise! I hope that we'll see more of the new little Tracy! )
| SN1983 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Another question would be, who'd have thought that John or any of the Tracy brothers would beat Alan in becoming fathers? LOL! I liked how you portray Alan's fears. They sound self centered, but when you think of the circumstances surrounding his birth and how he must have felt about his place in the Tracy fold as a result, they fit. Many stories on here have Jeff and some of his brothers even unable to deal with him. That kind of interaction would cause the grown up Alan to maintain the fear of being "not wanted" or "left out" very easily.
Well, enough rambling...I like the fact that you portrayed Alan and John as being close, because many stories portray them as distant. That's an interesting relationship to explore. I kind of like the idea of the two opposites being close, maybe not best friends, but not John barly tolerating Alan's presence.
Okay, I'm stopping now.
| Digi-Girl101 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
OMG! LOVE IT! GREAT ENDING!