|Reviews for Team Possible|
| LTAOZFAN chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
When I read the first line of this poem, I immediately thought of two lines from another poem: "On the fifteenth of May, in the jungle of Noole, In the heat of the day, in the cool of the pool . . . "
Your poem is good, sir, but now you have planted a plot bunny in my mind for a Kim Possible poem in the style of Doctor Seuss. I wonder just what this will grow into?
"Them's my views, amen, so be it."
"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson
| Danny-171984 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Nice...but it kind of reminds me of Green Lantern's chant...I don't know why. Well, keep on writing.
| Samurai Crunchbird chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Yes, I liked the poem. Its words rang true to the essence of the team.
Was it just a coincidence the phrases in the verse took the shape of a 'Spinning Top of Doom'? I kid because I care.
I wonder what the deal is with all these poems at once. First, it was JA, then KT, now this one. Your mentioned a contest for yours. That still does not explain the others. Maybe it's just another coincidence...
"There's no such thing as a coincidence!" Special Agent Jethro Gibbs, 'NCIS'.
Again, I kid because I care.
Your friend in writing,
The Samurai Crunchbird
| Sentinel 103 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Less is more! Gee Cap nicely done. Keep up the good work.
| MrNielsen chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Your really got essence of Kim and Ron. Great work! Awaiting your next poem with great excitement.
Over and out
| screaming phoenix chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
So much said with so few words.
| Star-Eva01 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
A take on the words spoken by Hal Jordan as he recharged his ring at the power battery.
And it fits so well with how many see Kim and Ron:
Two half's that make one whole.
Great Work Capt.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Nicely done. You do have a knack for poetry.