Reviews for Lost Letters
foxdvd chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Oh... love the description, love the writing mysteries (although I may have an inkling as to what's goign on, as ti's a common practice in my lil' corner of the world), loved the bantering... but then again, what's not to love when you put your fingers to the keyboard?
shawdoo chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I love the premise of the story. Very interesting beginning. I'm very intrigued by the letters. Hope you'll be posting again soon.
ToKillABlockingNerd chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
o great beginning to a (hopefully) great story! lol. just the right amount of humour, and I loved the reference to Facebook
chrysalis escapist chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Hm, that sounds like it's going to be very interesting!

It might be faster if I told you what I didn't like, because there was nothing :). I'll try to refrain from quoting though.

Okay, so: I loved the opening, I'd be sweating now even if it weren't equally hot here, such a fantastic description, I could quote that whole paragraph!

Loved the description of the future victim, and her energy (but plaster coming from the ceiling, oi! ;) )

I have quite an idea in my head of Mrs Adams! Lovely character :)

Unaware of her shadow stretching, and the lost letter greying, that was some foreshadowing!

Loved how you opposed Danny's reaction to the heat to Mac's, Angell's and Stella's.

Writing letters, yeah, lovely idea. I miss it! Loved the banter rising from it. Flack's humor rubbing off :), rich and ageing relatives, ha!

'the glitter in her eye that wasn't just from the sunlight bouncing off the concrete' hehe (I said I'd TRY to refrain from quoting.)

Loved all the little details you give, all the little reactions to the heat, the building the victim lived in, the people who may have witnessed the crime, and so on...

And I'm very intrigued, by the case, the victim, your descriptions...

Looking forward to more!
sarramaks chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Very intriguing! I love the mystery that this fic brings, can't wait to see who she actually is...

Loved the descriptions of the heat, they made it very palpable. As with the character you gave the girl - I'm sorry she's dead, she seemed like a nice person. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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