Reviews for Landmine
Scarlette Symphony chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
This was...superior. I really cant write my lemons/limes in such a manner as this, and Im rather JEALOUS. But its a good thing! I seriously enjoyed this quick one shot -no pun intended there- you tweak the characters just slightly to fit the scenario, but yet keep much of their originality, therefore a very realistic happening for the pairing. (I mean, if you can CALL anime relationships realistic) True to character actions and thougts, absolutely loved it.
otakunurse chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
So... this is like my up-teenth time reading it... I love this story. It is a very creative and innovative way of writing! I love it!
Shadow chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Dang . . . Okay kinda confusing but good
Kai Yukari chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
I love this story! Please continue making more KanamexSousuke stories D
Izanagi84 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
The sexual energy is palapable in this fic. You hit the perfect balance of narration and action, it was almost painful to read...

But, it's still going on my favourites. I love it!
gaojo chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Wonderful pace. Didnt slow down for a second, but i guess thats what made it so intense.
empathapathique chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Oh my god. This was amazing. I love you right now. Gosh, I'm PANTING.

Excellent work!
Emmi-chan chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
*fans self* Wow, that was hot.
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Excellent! Great job, good luck!
Summer chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
That was OMG SO HOT!
catbaker chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
this was simply one of the most delightful reads I've had in WEEKS! I'm new to the fandom so I've been scouring through the fics looking for some "research" material to get a better grasp on the characters...I'm sort of dabbling in a post FMP: TSR story. Anyway, this was great, tastefully done and just wonderful to read! Thank you!
Cla.V chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Great story... Very well written! :D

And...

HOT :X
FallenPure chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
HOT..I just got into this coupling but..way..to...go!
Poisoned Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Nice! I like the way you implied it! Not to graphic but still suggestive!

Panda-chan
radicaledward550 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
not sure about souske's frame of mind or kaname's that they both got off on his bleeding but- in all honesty- these are two screwed up kids so if it works, it works!
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