|Reviews for The Black Twins|
| happybunny688 chapter 5 . 1/9/2010
I really like this story and hope you continue it!
| Bridgefall chapter 5 . 12/16/2009
This story is absolutely genius (in my opinion!) there's only one point that confuses me : Aberforth Dumbledore is a member of the Order of the Phoenix and brother of Dumbledore, so why doesn't he know, that sirius is innocent?
but other than that it's fantastic! I mean, your pranks so far, are reasonable, do-able and hilarious! Your grammar is also really good (many people who have english as a first language have really bad grammar) and your plotline doesn't make jumps that we normal people without the whole story and it's intricacies in our minds can follow easily.
I really like the story and if it weren't for the fact that I'm in school at the moment and the teacher is already glaring at me for sniggering during her lecture I would be rolling on the floor and crying with laughter! Book-Skiing!
Please continue as soon as possible and bring a bit laughter into the dull classes!
| heyo chapter 5 . 11/30/2009
i like :) it was funny and so original ...
cant wait for more ...
| T chapter 5 . 11/11/2009
I love this story. I would love to read more and see how it goes. Who would Harry be paire with? Would Sirius still go to Azkaban since it seems he would tell Harry about Peter? Would James and Lily actually die?
| Xx Kiamii xX chapter 5 . 10/10/2009
Hahahhaha Harry doesn't crawl, he runs in these situations. That made me laugh really hard. This story is so fun to read!
| skyflyte12 chapter 5 . 9/28/2009
| Wandering-Mind 95 chapter 5 . 8/18/2009
O MY GOD! This story is absoulty BRILLIANT! I think I almost had an asthma attack from trying to breath while laughing. Now my whole upper body hurts. Anyway amazing. The twins are hilirous. I can't wait until the next update! Until next time. ;}
| brightsun89 chapter 5 . 7/23/2009
I love I love it! I was laughing so hard when I was reading about the prank! you have to update soon, please! I need more chaos loving black twins!
| BlistersOnMyFingers chapter 5 . 7/22/2009
you ask 'a real win, or the loony bin', and I say your story is a win, and goes in the loony bin, because loony people (like myself) think its a real win, therefore, the loony bin is actually a real win, and you should write another ridiculously long chapter
| Nordfjord chapter 5 . 7/9/2009
This is great! D
I don't have a lot to say except KEEP IT COMING, 'cause it's hilarious.
| Nordfjord chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
This story is GREAT. I just want to tell you that "the calm before the storm" was hilarious. Keep doing what you're doing! Update pronto! D
| Lendor chapter 5 . 6/6/2009
Please do NOT let Harry get close to Peter.
Very great story
| Origina1ity chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
Awesome! Cant Wait for more!
| likeahuginacup chapter 5 . 5/21/2009
.Gawsh... i[heart]theBlackTwins. This story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I'm in love with it... Siriusly! Ginormious FROG! Genious, Pure LEDGE! And the book surfing!, poor little Remus [that was Remus ri.?] Are yooh gona update again soon.? Please please please update! It'll be like Chistmas in June.. J.K. Okay well thats all... for now XD Bye.!
| Maya G chapter 5 . 5/18/2009
please update soon. if you don't, i might think you abandonated this story (and the other, potter army). since they are both wonderful stories with an original plot, you can be evil enought to do it can you :P! LOL, great story, keep working