Reviews for How Devlin came to be
nequam-tenshi chapter 5 . 4/20/2009
the kids remind me of Kaoru's and Kenshin's kid from "Runoin Kenshin"

love the story! so cute!
Thinker27 chapter 5 . 2/7/2009
lol i really hope you write more
ALLDEMLEMONS chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
OMGAWD! I love this fic! It's so awesome! Please write the next chapter faster! I wanna know what happens to Ben in the next chapter! (but we already know that don't we XD)
Hikary Sanoko chapter 5 . 12/15/2008
i love this fic! i's so cute! update please!
Cylon One chapter 5 . 10/18/2008
Good chapter and cute with Ben and Keven's kids.
music-is-luv chapter 5 . 9/20/2008
Haha, I just had a vision!

Ben: [[coyly, in nurse outfit, walks of to Kevin and kisses]]

Kevin: [[smooches, grin]] Now bend over to the front! And touch your toes! [[rap song starts playing]]

Mua haha, funny shit, funny shit. :D
realityfling18 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
i love it! keep it up
DRUNK-OFF-LIFE chapter 5 . 8/31/2008
keep writting. i like this stroy with the whole its isn't like adoption. and it seems somewhat normal to the aliens. keep writting as much as possible.
laceypinkdream chapter 5 . 8/6/2008
wo~ yeah
Robot Maddness Strikes chapter 2 . 8/2/2008
AHAHAHAAHA! I always laugh when I see them mention Kirby. Who can't? This is pretty interesting. A little work on the grammer and it will turn out really well I think!
Alana-kittychan chapter 5 . 7/28/2008
Alana: aw cute
Mantinas chapter 5 . 7/24/2008
Aw, they're so cute! Great chapter!
purpleprinsess chapter 5 . 7/17/2008
yay! Me loves devlin and kenny! and incest ;D
SilentKiller1 chapter 5 . 7/17/2008
funny, the kids are cute wanting to protect their "mom"
Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 5 . 7/17/2008
This was a great chapter; I love how you portray Kenny & Devlin in this chapter.

Keep up the excellent work!
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