Reviews for How Devlin came to be
Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
Great chapter & I have two ideas for your next chapter B & K go see double feature horror cinmea Ex:Suspiria & Inferno, City of the Living Dead & The Beyond, Hellraiser & Candyman, or Demons & Demons 2 plans a small Baby shower for Ben.

Can't wat for the next chapter!
Gwyndolyn Slim chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
please hurry coz this is so hawt even tho their waz no fuck scene which I would have enjoyed immensley. plz hurry!
Mantinas chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Great story so far, I can't wait to read more!
purpleprinsess chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
If Kevin knew that Ben could get MPrg than why did he ehehe him without a suit? Does Kevin want a baby or something?
Warren Burgess chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Um...'kay. Bevin Sucks! Anyway Ben marries/has kids with Kai! And Devlin is NOT Related to Ben! It said so in Ben 10 Week! *Sticks Tongue Out!*
Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This was not only a great chapter but it's also very well written. It's rare to read well written romance fan fiction let alone Fan Fiction in general; I hope this will encourages you to write another chapter.
SilentKiller1 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
poor ben, that would suck, poor ben, kevin should have used protection
Undoubtfuly Lost chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Good start! I love where it's going!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Kit Of Yaoi chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
i like it so far

cant wait for the next chapter
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