|Reviews for How Devlin came to be|
| Undoubtfuly Lost chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
Oh! I love how... father-like Kevin is acting! Asking if he would be a good father, so cute! xD And the line That's what you do...When you're in love..." Reminded me of Hercules! ("People do crazy things when they're in love" Non the less! I adore this chapter! Looking forward to your next update!
| Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
Great chapter & I have two ideas for your next chapter B & K go see double feature horror cinmea Ex:Suspiria & Inferno, City of the Living Dead & The Beyond, Hellraiser & Candyman, or Demons & Demons 2 plans a small Baby shower for Ben.
Can't wat for the next chapter!
| Gwyndolyn Slim chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
please hurry coz this is so hawt even tho their waz no fuck scene which I would have enjoyed immensley. plz hurry!
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Great story so far, I can't wait to read more!
| purpleprinsess chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
If Kevin knew that Ben could get MPrg than why did he ehehe him without a suit? Does Kevin want a baby or something?
| Warren Burgess chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Um...'kay. Bevin Sucks! Anyway Ben marries/has kids with Kai! And Devlin is NOT Related to Ben! It said so in Ben 10 Week! *Sticks Tongue Out!*
| Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This was not only a great chapter but it's also very well written. It's rare to read well written romance fan fiction let alone Fan Fiction in general; I hope this will encourages you to write another chapter.
| SilentKiller1 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
poor ben, that would suck, poor ben, kevin should have used protection
| Undoubtfuly Lost chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Good start! I love where it's going!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Kit Of Yaoi chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
i like it so far
cant wait for the next chapter