Reviews for Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness
dragonsbride chapter 22 . 11/29/2016
Oh no. Not Ernie. Wasn't there enough death? Why did he have to die and why didn't Susan hide?!
dragonsbride chapter 21 . 11/29/2016
This was so much crueler than the battle in the books. You somehow managed to fill all these characters, that once were not more than names, with life and this made it harder to read about Dennis, Colins or Michaels deaths. But I wish you would've sticked more to the canon, for example with Lavender who didn't die according to J.K.R.. Would have made the battle more bearable...
dragonsbride chapter 18 . 11/29/2016
Oh God, this is so sick. I just wanna start crying. Poor Michael and Terry - what a terrible he had to do. I need to quit reading for today - I' really shattered...
dragonsbride chapter 7 . 11/29/2016
OMG, McGonagall is the best! :D
TheWordsIWrite chapter 25 . 11/28/2016
I truly adored this story. Upon first stumbling across it I simply thought it was a ingenious idea to latch onto part of the untold story of the 7th book. As I read however I truly came to care about all of these characters. These last few chapters have left me a sobbing mess as I mourned the deaths of characters I had a neutral opinion on a mere two days ago. Ernie, Micheal, Dean, Pavarti, Colin and so many others have wound their way into my heart in a way only fictional characters can. I have read the Harry Potter books many times, but thanks to you reading them now will hold different meaning because through you I came to know these characters. You did a beautiful job with this. J.K Rowling would be extraordinarily proud I believe if she stumbled upon this.
dragonsbride chapter 6 . 11/28/2016
dragonsbride chapter 4 . 11/28/2016
Great chapter and thank you for letting the Slytherins participte in the DA. Maybe they are Slytherins but I never believed that none of them stood up against the Death Eaters.
dragonsbride chapter 3 . 11/28/2016
I'm so proud of Neville and Ernie! I laughed so hard because of the first part of the chapter but the last made freeze. Snape was on their side for gods sake!
dragonsbride chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
What a wonderful chapter! OMG so very well written!
dragonsbride chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
I already liked Seamus, but with this few words at the beginning you really made him one of my favourite characters! And the exchange between Ginny and Hannah - and Neville has absolutely no idea what they are talking about. :D Men...
msquared chapter 25 . 11/22/2016
This was an amazing story that I could not put down! It not only highlights the pressures on soldiers but also civilians and children who have to grow up too fast when war is nearby.
jacquelacina chapter 25 . 11/20/2016
this is one of the best story I've read in a long time. and I can see it being very much canon
Kettleblack chapter 25 . 11/15/2016
So many recommendations to read this. When I finally do I discover that it is just another piece of crap in an ocean of crap. Really disappointed by this fic
Avid HP fan chapter 25 . 11/13/2016
Dear Andrew, I saw your novel recommended on Pinterest, and as I was sorely missing my Harry Potter fix. I decided to give it a try. Yours was the very first true fan fiction I have ever read. And I must say I was wonderfully shocked at how well you had grasped the characters. I shouted with Joy, as well being moved to tears, (which if I'm transparent I didn't with the original novels but once) many times...the worst being when Ernie sacrificed himself for his Family. I think your writings are more than good enough to be presented to Ms. Rowling and or a Publisher. I now have favorite moments in my mind's wizarding world that will have been formed because you took up the gauntlet. This work of Art is as real to me as all the other novels are. Thanks for the wonderful times at Hogwarts.
Guest chapter 25 . 10/31/2016
This was engaging, compelling, exciting, heartbreaking, suspenseful, and many other adjectives I can't begin to come up with. I loved every second of it and only put it down when I had to. Thank you for writing something worthy of being a part of Harry Potter.
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