are you going to update soon? please, i really like the new characters! AND i would like to see teyla wake up!

I want to hear more about all these new characters, Baker, Conway etc. Very intriguing. And to see Teyla wake up of course. I love how you write John here and look forward to the next part. I hope you update soon.

Interesting AU. I really enjoyed trying to figure out all the little differences and what was going on. What a fabulous introduction to Teyla. You really captured the power and immediacy of their attraction, even one-sided on his part since she is unconscious.

Interesting idea for a story. You've done well with is so far. I hope there's more soon. Keep writing.

Here goes - review time! *crosses fingers*

I am so glad Teyla's going to wake up! :D (I mean, I figured she would, but still - it's nice to hear the good news!) And that she wasn't hurt *too* badly - it looked worse than it really was, which is good. I really liked Jonas, you come up with some of the best original characters! I hope we'll get to see more of him. . .? I also like Conway, he seems like a good, loyal soldier and friend. :D "The nurse who has a crush on you" - I'm not sure why, but that made me laugh. I can easily see all the nurses (and every female in the vicinity, too!) having a crush on John Sheppard. He is quite the ladies' man! ;)

This was a good chapter - I look forward to the next whenever you post it! :D (I hope this review comes through!) I hope you keep enjoying your vacation! :)

*hugs*

~fyd~

Wow, I really like this! Update soon.

TF, so far I'm loving this story. Please update soon! I'm so looking forward to when Teyla wakes up!

interesting little twist there cant wait to see what happens next :) keep it coming.

Excellent update TF! Extremely well written as always and look forward to hearing the first exchange between Shep/Teyla when she wakes up!

Awesome update TF. Thanks hun. :D Looking forward to chapter 3.

Good beginning

The story this interesting

update soo

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Huh, I was impressed with this story line and where it's going. It's been a long time since I've read SGA fanfic so I was happy to find this one. Good job, I'm waiting patiently for Chapter two. Nothing yet to really get to know the characters, so I'll post a more indepth review when I read further into the story. Keep it coming.

I think it's actually gonna let me review first try for once! *keeps fingers crossed*

Okay - first off, I think this is a really interesting idea! Slightly AU, but still with a lot of canon elements. I like how you introduced the plot, and the characters - very believably. You worked in some of John's background, an explenation, naturally, mixing it in with the flow of the chapter. :) I find that really hard to do! :o

While I could never root for John as far as a romance with Teyla goes (I'm sorry, sis! :S), I do hope the guy gets his happily-ever-after. :)

Very intersting start! *hugs*

~fyd~

TF, I can't wait to see where this story goes. Update soon!

Hello love. This is very interesting. I'm guessing the injured woman is Teyla?

Can't wait for more.

Just one thing though... There's a few spelling mistakes. Silly things like "go" instead of "to". You can send it to me to beta for you if you want :)