|Reviews for The Inevitable|
| jk chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
The first part made it sound like a affair gone wrong
| Shawna9301 chapter 26 . 12/21/2013
I loved what you did with this
| Shawna9301 chapter 24 . 12/20/2013
Please finish this story!
| Shawna9301 chapter 21 . 12/20/2013
I thought you did really well with this chapter.
| Shawna9301 chapter 16 . 12/20/2013
I liked the dialect added; it was interesting and dead on I feel.
| vanessaxo chapter 29 . 9/6/2013
Hey, I was just rereading my fave epov stories, and I've just now realized you haven't finished this! Please continue this and don't forget about it :(
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
| K8yx chapter 19 . 5/23/2012
Just thought you should know the Arabic in this chapter makes no sense what so ever. It's meant to be Battle Hymn of the Republic in Arabic but you've got well the words are the below:
"Senior Board Aaoxs Maine you Fu no Gluar d Vanier de Stokes de cents Board Resens"
Yeah it makes as much sense as it does to me. I speak Arabic so thought i should let you know.
Anyway apart from that it is an excellent story that is well written and shows a clear perspective of Edward's view.
Looking forward to reading other work by you
| Little-miss-twilight chapter 29 . 11/17/2011
Well, this is probably the best fan fic I've read in Edward's point of view. This doesn't mean it is without flaws however, but they are minor. Grammar, and occasionally spelling, and probably the one that bothers me most, overuse of the word forth. This may have been intentional, but forth is one of those words that is great until the use becomes excessive, then it becomes annoying, however, I thouroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to your next update.
| Kissme123 chapter 29 . 9/10/2011
why you stop?
| Kissme123 chapter 13 . 9/10/2011
hotdog fight over hotdog
cow jacob's joke
warmjake is really warm
| Kissme123 chapter 9 . 9/9/2011
| Kissme123 chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
| Kissme123 chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
WOW. That was aresome...
| Traditional.Rose chapter 29 . 8/28/2011
I've been readying/dying over this story all weekend. Its so brilliant, so completely perfect for Edward. PLEASE don't leave it there! Please write the next chapter and finish the story. I'm begging you!