Reviews for Could Have
TheConjuringMind chapter 1 . 5/19
Simply touching.
Very beautiful writing, perfect ending scene.
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Wow! Very well written. Considering the character was a writer himself, these thoughts are probably right in line to the way he would really think.

I have to say, though, the ending to this movie would not have worked if she did survive and he ended up with her.

Great job!
Riana Salvatore chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I think you should write a second chapter where they are able to revive her.
Living.By.Will chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
It was very short and sweet!

I am trying to write my own Invisible fic but I can't seem to get the motivation to continue with it...

Anyhos. . . it was wonderful!
brittanysnodes chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
You know I wasn't a big fan of the ending either but I still liked this little story.