Reviews for On the Mend
Reinbeau chapter 17 . 4/13
Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
BridieM chapter 17 . 5/18/2014
Thank you for writing this story. I hope you have the opportunity to continue your writing in the future. :D
MARTHA HUGHES chapter 17 . 9/12/2013
I LOVE TWILIGHT FAN FICTION. THIS WAS A GREAT STORY BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE GIVEN US MORE
OF THE GOOD AT THE END. WE ALL WANT MORE OF EDWARD!
se19 chapter 17 . 4/4/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! FINSH
LivingInALostGeneration chapter 17 . 3/31/2011
I loved it! It was so very well written and the plot was very well thought out! Excellent! xxxxxxx
peregrin chapter 17 . 12/8/2010
There two things left unexplained:

How did he learn that she was in Forks?

Did they arrest that guy who tried to kill her?
peregrin chapter 5 . 12/8/2010
Now that's better (that she told them).
peregrin chapter 4 . 12/7/2010
Now, that's really stupid.

I mean, even from her point of view.
sarlovesoccer chapter 17 . 9/4/2010
Awesome story! But I have a few questions : First of all was Bella changed right after she was shot?

Why was she adressed as Mrs. Swan not or Dwyer?
Too Lazy To Login chapter 17 . 7/15/2010
I loved this story. It was so... powerful!

:D
muzaklover chapter 17 . 6/29/2010
Great story. I enjoyed it quite a lot. Can't wait to read more from you.
rosacullen chapter 17 . 5/30/2010
really good story. i liked it alot
JennCorinthos chapter 17 . 12/12/2009
WOW.. What an AMAZING STORY...

JENNIFER
CrazyLittleWriter chapter 17 . 10/28/2009
Beautifully written throughout. I loved the epilogue because of how you chose to it with Bella defending a case similiar to her own. Thank you for taking the time to write this story.
Sam604 chapter 17 . 9/24/2009
that was an incredible story. very touching and moving, had me crying at some parts. Your depiction of Bella capture and rape was well written as well. enjoyed it a lot.
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