Reviews for Okaasan! Otousan!
Dotchi13 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I love it!
It really has a Daa! Daa! Daa! feel to it :)
Lost-puppyEYES chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
"flicking, the two items..." should be "flicking, the item..."
"Ne?" should be replaced with "Eh?" ("ne?", meaning something along the lines of "right?")

this was vewy kute. :3
harley944 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
cute
NotaPunk chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Shika-moo and Hina-kawii would make great parents! Great job!
Ms.Naruto-Fan chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
So Cute, i loved it
gracemis chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
super cute. I love Shika/Hina and little Asuma progeny
CobaltHeart chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Great onshot Tari-chan -
k u r r o p o i chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
XD hmm! those names fit them very well!
mialuv998 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Cute, very cute! _ I didn't see any mistakes on my read through. So I think you're safe. Good job!