|Reviews for All Work and No Play|
| u r awesome chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Hah funny story
| evil-weapons-baby chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I dont get it does that mean there having a 3-some?
| Tallis-chan chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
The very last paragraph, I didn't fully understand. If you could explain that to me, I would be very happy.
Otherwise, I love this story. Teehee.
| anthropomorphychan chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I can't say that I'm fanatic about smuts ... but I must say, smutty as this was, I actually enjoyed it ... ew, that sounded wrong.
Let me rephrase it in a less ... dodgy way. *coughs* Your fic is good. There. I said it! Yay! Nice job!
| TaintedMoonlight chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I rather do like the way you write Neji, Lee, and Tenten. Rather interesting. The ending line was just perfect too.
One criticism, though. At the beginning, you wrote:
This, however, was underhand and completely uncalled for.
I think you meant underhanded. (Sorry, I'm just nitpicky about grammar and spelling when I catch it.)
Very good fic.
| KiriNoMiko chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
new and interesting and well written /and/ smutty, what more can a girl ask for?