very well written. good grammar/punctuation and break in paragraphs. timeline/storyline true to Jack McKineys paperback novels.

Sad and lovely. Poor Exedore...

Very beatifully written, capturing the character flawlessly. Sweet.

Kenya-Princess Koriand'r of Tamaran

When I saw this title listed, I was not only jumping up and down saying, "Yes! Another Exedore story!", but, "Yes! Another Lady Iapetus story!" You may be the only person to write about Exedore, but that doesn't change the fact that you do it damn well. Of course, this turned out to be a compilation of the first two, but it's high time you got a review for this great stuff. And I can only hope that you intend to add chapters . Your writing is great, your characters are on target, and you give insight into an often neglected character (who just happens to be my favorite as well, in case you couldn't guess). I'm looking forward to more in the future.

Awesome!

Cool!

Another great fic, LadyIap! Loved the exchange between Max and Miriya. Very funny stuff! _

cool