Reviews for The Clouds We Are Under
angrylightning chapter 4 . 9/4/2008
Nice chapter! I'm really really curious to see how these four will live together lols it will be fun.
swordmagess chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
It's not bad for a first fanfic, however, I would suggest writing in third person. Not only is it harder for people to read when it's written in first, but when things are written in first person, people tend to lapse into self-inserts, whether they mean to or not.

Either way, good luck.
angrylightning chapter 3 . 7/1/2008
That was a very interesting chapter well done! I can't wait to see what Cloud will do!
Toons chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Damn... lol was hoping it'd get further. I hate waiting. :D

Update soon :D!
angrylightning chapter 2 . 6/12/2008
Ok to be honest I'd prefer it if these two chapters were one but it's ok like this too. I liked this very much I can't wait to see Cloud I'm wondering what will happen please update soon! good job!
angrylightning chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
This was nice and interesting!