Nice story!

I must have read this story at least five times over the last year and I think that it would have made a brilliant episode. Fantastic.

nicely done!

I enjoyed reading your story. It was so well written !

Great story!

Hi, exciting pace, bonding and just enough angish ... thanks for a great read! Both Tony and Gibbs hurt and in need of rescue by McGee and Ziva, it doesn't get much better ... Thanks and cheers!

Liked the ending.
It was so right. Just Gibbs and Tony

very much like the understated emotion at the ending, rings true

Enjoyed your story! Well written & intense...thanks for the great read!

Extremely suspenseful story. Keep on writing.

Nice job. Full of suspense and hard work.

Good job. Enjoyed it.

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Wow, great story and amazing Father/Son Gibbs/Tony ending. Very well written! Nice work ;)

WOW! Wonderfully intense, very nicely done...I liked how Gibbs & DiNozzo were able to help each other, and it wasn't all Gibbs helping Tony. Loved the ending!

Thanks for the story!

Hi, I enjoyed your story.

Tracy

REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY. WELL WRITTEN, SHORT ENOUGH AND ACTION PACKED. LOVE TONY AND GIBBS HELPING EACH OTHER OUT AND AS FATHER/SON RELATIONSHIP. THANKS FOR WRITING AND POSTING IT!