|Reviews for Broken|
| deleteme17 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Loved this poem- so wondeful, the way it flows and breaks, flows and breaks.
BTW, thankl you so much for both the review and the favouritng of my story- glad you liked it, and like how you told me how it made you feel- it was what I was trying to go for, but was not sure I achieved.
| millenniumthief chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Poor Ryou...it's a wonderful poem! It captures him well. I like this one a lot!
| sherabo chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
sad, but true, I like it.
| Always a Bookworm chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Aw, that's really beautiful. well done!
| Singer La chanteuse chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Ah, free verse. The one type of poetry that I can't write for the life of me. Very well done though. The last lines in particular really capture the reader.
Singer, La Chanteuse
| Akikee chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This poem really reminds me about all the pain Ryou had suffered because of Yami Bakura.