|Reviews for Without You|
| Samurai Crunchbird chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
(dons a black beret, black pants, and black turtleneck shirt while sporitng a thin moustache and 'soul patch' under the lower lip)
(snapping fingers) That was col, man...real cool!
(reverts back to regular clothes and no facial hair)
It poured out Ron's heart and soul, while letting him stay 'in character' throughout its presentation.
All in all, a great effort.
Your friend in writing,
The Samurai Crunchbird
| MrNielsen chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Now where's my hankie? I think there's a little drop on it's way...nah. Just kidding.
A beautiful poem. You really got the essence of Ron's feelings for a certain redhead. Good stuff!
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Cute poem. The only criticism I have is that you should try to keep each line the same number of syllables.
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Nice and sweet big guy!
| screaming phoenix chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Sweet. I like it. You tell a lot in very few words
| Kwebs chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Nice sentament by Ron Kaiokken. Thanks