I read all your initial disclaimers of homophobia and sexism and decided to give it a try and I am so glad I did!

I absolutely adored Neji and Tenten! I am on chap 6 now and bit where she kisses his forehead was so beautiful, but also in denial lol.

I was gonna keep my review all about how much I have enjoyed the story so far but then I read some nasty comments on this fic and it made me realise I should leave some positivity. Yes the story can get a bit childish at times but I want to acknowledge how brilliantly you created this story, I couldn’t have imagined doing that at 17! In fact I loved how Neji felt in character, the premise of Ino teaching Tenten how to be a seductress was pretty good too. And I am sure everything you wrote at 17, and the feedback you received has made you a better writer. Proud of your decision of leaving the story up and thank you for sharing it with us.

I read the warning about the sexist premise and slightly homophobic comments by some characters and decided to still give this a chance. let's be honest, most romance fics are a bit sexist, and having characters with homophobic opinions is still sadly true to life. But I'm sorry I can't read anymore of this stupidity.

Having a fully trained Ninja who doesn't know that she can't use her real name and shouldn't tell the target she is a Ninja while undercover is where I rage quit. How dumb is she meant to be?

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Sooo goooodddd

this was so sweet and I think the dialog was amazing I laughed and hoped so much for tenten for a minute I thought there wouldn't b a happy ending but it was wonderful and I asked everything about it kudos to you

rlly good!

Thanks for writing this story! It's super cute

Love this fic

I love your is extremely well have done an excellent only issue I can say I have with it is that the ending felt a bit rushed to me but that may just be me.I really like to read long stories.

Hi! I know this is an old fanfic. I’ve read this in two days and I must say this is by far one of my favorite Neji/Tenten fanfic. It was so relatable to them ! I thought it was super cute and I loved it ! Thanks for writing this ! It was good

There’s so much heteronormativity in this fic. I hope it’s old

OMG, I loved this fic soooooooo much! And loved how you made Ino and Hinata act. Also liked how you "created" the characters of Neji and Tenten, and how you described their feelings!

Re-reading one of my all time favourite NejiTen fics and it's still just as good as I remember, maybe even better!

You know a book on average has about 77,000 words and this fanfiction has about 112,000 words so you pretty much just wrote a book and im crying that I finished it.

Goood