Reviews for The First Born Child
SilentAttendance chapter 60 . 12/24/2016
Im glad there were no regrets. Sadness, yes, but no regrets. It'd be horrible for Eva if she lived through Colin's death, since she'd probably find some way to blame herself...
Could you write a really short sequel where everyone reunites at King's Cross? Like what happened with Harry and Dumbledore... It'd be so sweet~
lizyeh2000 chapter 60 . 4/22/2016
Loved your story , now favourited! Such a sad tragic end huh bitersweet
mworth1019 chapter 60 . 2/14/2016
Great story well done...sad though
chibi-Clar chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Guest chapter 60 . 6/26/2014
I cried when Eva died
muzikchic4eva chapter 60 . 6/14/2014
I absolutely love your story. Eva is such an amazing person to know, and her interaction with Draco was one of my favorite parts of this story. They truly loved each other, despite the misunderstandings and the fragility of the trust between them.

I wish Eva and Colin could have been able to tell their feelings for each other. It was so tragic, reading about Colin's death, and then all the photographs he took of her.

At times, I wish you'd given this story a happier ending (because it's just so painful thinking about what could have been and what actually happened). But I think that Luna's right; it's much happier that they're both dead rather than one trying to live without the other.

Do you think you'd ever write a story about what could have been?
Mezzem313 chapter 38 . 2/20/2014
BEST IDEA EVER! I love your story, just letting you know :)
Bookworm6193 chapter 60 . 8/22/2013
Wow! I didn't expect to become emotionally involved in this story to the point of tears by the last chapter. Awesome story!
10101010011 chapter 60 . 8/13/2013
Good job on this! I love the character basis for Eva and everything and it was extremely exciting to read, but I wish that Eva and Colin would have gotten together! It would have been adorable:)
Shobunaga chapter 56 . 8/8/2013
I didn't think you would kill him... I'm so upset. I hope Draco doesn't do anything stupid. Why would you kill Colin?! I was thinking they were going to randomly kiss and... Okay I'm going to keep reading.
Lois Nova Black chapter 60 . 3/6/2013
So sad eva died! Loved it though!
loveislouder94 chapter 4 . 12/13/2012
I know it's definitely late, but I hope you had a good time at your prom! Again, well done! :)
loveislouder94 chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
Even though I know the story's finished and this doesn't make any difference, the length of the chapters is perfectly fine. And this chapter was an interesting glimpse into their sibling relationship. Good work! :)
loveislouder94 chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
Sounds like she's had a difficult life...I think you've established your OC very well. And I admire you for it. Personally, I would never be brave enough to try writing one. Nice work! :)
loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
An extremely interesting first chapter. I'm glad the rest is up so I can read it straight away! :)
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