Reviews for My Puppy Dog Eyes
To-Remember-Me-By chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
adorable! can i come see the lion king on ice too? :D awesomeness! uber-cuteness. luv this fic. you should write more XD
marmeenoir17 chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I loved it! You're awesome!
IceCreamSandwich chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
That's super cute, and really in charactor... all in all, I give a ten.
teapirategirl chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Gosh this was so cute and in character. u have perry down perfectly...why don't u continue with more situations with the 'eyes'? come on!
Failariel Pallanen chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
'Damn, when did i become such a pansy?' omg, that line is just so perry. lol, this story is awesomely cute, kudos on your first fic, and i hope to see more from you
Fyrerayne chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
The actual content was good. But you really should've edited it. If you go and fix the punctuation and some sentence structure toward the end it'll be perfect XD

Good job!

Bells of Tomorrow chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
"God, do I miss the days when he was afraid of me…" LOL, such a Perry line.

But yes...cute! It would be fun to see them at the actual show, but that's up to you. ;) Anyway, nice job. _
just-another-generic-emo-kid chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
It was very good for your first fic! I really liked the idea and I loved the way you portrayed it. Your JD is so cute and I just wanna hug him when he's being annoying (and he KNOWS it. lulz)

Just one thing that I notices other than a few capitalization mistakes (but hey, who cares? that happens.) :

changing his tack to get me to cave in

'tack' should be tact.

But other than was very good.
RaynaSummers chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Ackle! *dies of cuteness*

That was adorable. Excellent job on your first fic!

I'll keep watch for more of your work.

Graffiti2DMyHeart chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Hey, don't be so hard on yourself! Its excellent, and I can't believe that this is your first fic. Its so well written. It would be a cool idea if you continued this as other situations where J.D. tries to use his eyes to get things from Perry. Just saying. Wonderful job!