Reviews for Abusement Park
Kosaru chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Pretty good! Although that's the 2nd time someone gets on a ride after eating, then throws up. I've gotten on rides after eating, and that doesn't happen to me. I wonder why that is?
Big bird in small cage chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Genious I loved this story so much ha ha ha ha total choas that could haved been avoided but Lumpy was stupid enought not to

Oh well I just wanna say that you are a great writter and always make the greatest stories eva!