Reviews for Fairytale SandCastle
darkrunner chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
I honest to goodness freaked out when I saw a Lifehouse song I didn't know. _;; It's from back when they were Blyss, and then they released it on the Hanging by a Moment single, hence why I didn't know it...

Anyway, for such a short fic, it was good! Describes what they'd be like PERFECTLY. Good luck in the contest!
Salkiethia chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Vivid, disturbing imagery. Not as emotionally charged as your previous two fics, but still very well-written.

You manage to get across a great deal in a very short piece, which is intriguing. Almost like poetry...

Good job.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Very nice. I think the bunny was cooperative enough.
Rainbrat chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I don't know, i just /heart/ this for some reason :D

I liked your use of words and your imagery. Well done

WithABunny chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I don't actually watch Yu-Gi-Oh myself and thus don't know much about these characters and the plot, but I must say, I like the imagery here. :)