Youve got to be shitting me ...

You are telling me there is NO ONE in the entire multiversum that has a chance against those four "freak gods" ?

Not even Q ?

These gods remind me of those in Dan Simmons "Illium" and "Olympos"...

In fact , Im now sure you got your ideas from there ...

Nice battle scenes. I'm looking forward to seeing what our Chaos Gods do in response to the Ori attack.

Hmm. I'm disappointed with this chapter. Despite all the hot-blooded, violent, and generally awesome shit that went down in it, the lack of your usual polish and the cliched, amateurish descriptions of the combat crippled the effectiveness of the narrative as a whole. For what was essentially an action chapter, the action was sorely lacking.

Perhaps you should try to make it more visceral, more meticulously described, to lend it a sense of style.

What was great about Thousand Shinji was that its characters, (with the notable exception of newly crowned Magnificent Bastard Shinji) while heavily changed and twisted by the influences of Chaos, were still somewhat recognizable or at least developed in a logical way. Not so with this fic, wherein not only do we get the increasingly irritating and underdeveloped Chaos Gods, but now cavalcades of Mary Sue badass anti-villain types without any personality.

Skipping from scene to scene with nary a paragraph in each, jumping from one set of combatants to the next, you start sounding like every bad, thirteen-year-old DBZ watching wannabe author who has ever shat out another brick of unreadable gibberish with which to tarnish the web in his youthful ignorance and idiocy.

All evidence points to you being a better writer than this, to there being more you are capable of than generic authorial wank. So take your time, and flesh out the story, give us some meat to latch onto like the parasites we are, some characters that we can give a shit about.

Awesome.

Simply Awesome!

Keep up the great work!

I laughed evily all the way through this chapter! I feel great. Thank You!

This is awesome.

I wish I had known about it earlier. I would have started reading it the moment it came online.

Or perhaps I wish I hadn't found out about it until it was completed. Then I would be spared the agony of waiting for the next chapter.

Another fantastic Chapter! I just wish I knew enough about all the crossovers you were doing...

This has some interesting development. However, I still have to beg you don't do anything too harsh to Nanoha and Fate in this... Please update again soon!

Tzintchi is a smart guy to have shut up at that point. Though he should have placed the blame on Mislaato. Now that would get him out of the dog house.

Okay, I know that the former Shinji, Rei, Misato, and Asuka are all a "bit" evil and vindictive but I have to ask that you don't hurt Nanoha, Fate, or Vivio too badly in this story. I really like all three of them and its my sincere hope that you just turn them somehow or have the TSAB ally with them rather than hurting them...

Ah, the inquisition, those crazy fuckers. It'll be interesting to see what kind of stuff they'll pull, though I suppose the imbalance in power will make things a little less so.

Nice to see an update, at any rate, especially one as twisted as this.

well after your long absence(maybe it just seemed long to me) I decided to drop a few lines since with my knowledge I have no way of properly reviewing this glorious insanity.

So I'll resume myself to saying that I want to see more and I can't wait for the next update. Whatever your reasons were for the delay, I hope you're not having any real time problems and were just hit with writers block or something.

Anyway, good luck to ya and I can't wait for the next update.

This a good start I hope you update soon

*brain implodes from so many cross-overs of shows he only partially remembers* gah... the cake is a lie, the cake is a lie, the cake is a-(continuity error sentence structure 100100100101 reboot command authorized) blarg... wow that hurt, hopefully my brain doesnt deflate from the next chapter this is vry had to keep up with ya know?

Wow, that was a lot more then I had antipicated. While I was kind of expecting some of that, and good job with that as well, I had no idea of the extra stuff that's now in Xander. The Black Rage and Red Thirst came out of nowhere for me. While the Black Rage would have it's uses, like with Hulk, from what was said it seems that he would never be able to leave it once entered. I had originally thought that the power he was opened up to was the Warp, and while this might still be true, it is still not much use with the complications.

It was really a bit of a shock seeing Buffy getting into the books, but I'm a bit confused over whether she was just researching in order to fight, or if she was learning in case she needs to fight fire with fire. Without the issues of Ruinous Powers being involved with magic, that might just allow it to be simply one more resource to be used. Although, from seeing evil Willow (which was truly awesome in my opinion), that might not be the case.

I'm not sure where the last bit is placed. While a quick search showed that they were wolves of Odin, I'm thinking that there are a lot of realities with them. I suppose that it might be O!MG, but the gods are mightily active there and I don't see them allowing them access either at all or unmolested movement and actions if they still arrive... Oh well. Wherever they are, I'll be happy to see it. Keep up the good work!