Reviews for Hiking Off Trail
BeckyJ1305 chapter 3 . 1/8/2015
BTW 'nee-chan' means big sister, and 'nii-san' means big brother, so I doubt Ayame would address Kiba as 'big brother'
'-Chan' would be the way Ayame and Hana address each other, and Ayame would call Kiba 'Kiba-kun'
10thDoctorFanGirl chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Daaman chapter 6 . 7/14/2009
update soon please
narutoadventurist chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
GhoulishCannibal chapter 6 . 11/16/2008
This is an amazing story, it's well done and it's easy to picture by just reading. I really like it and I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I know you said you didn't want a ton of ocs, but you taking any?
Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi chapter 4 . 10/15/2008
Tekaiteishu's Soulreaper chapter 3 . 10/14/2008
katrina C chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
I have an idea for you...

You could do the meeting between the Monk and Asuma... and the first day at the Temple...

Then go "time Skip" to when they head back to Konoha...

*shrugs* unless you really want to go into more detail.

*smiles* but that's just my suggestion. Keep up the good work, I really like the fic!
Oathkeeper-Ryu chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
Heh I like it quite a bit.
unfeastedacular chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
Good story, keep it up. Though i'd kinda keep away from sora and all the filler stuff. I'm pretty sure most people would agree that the filler episodes were boring and didn't make any sense at all. For example, ninja that could even rival akatsuki by blowing up konoha with one attack and how sora is so calm in kyuubi mode.
HalfTangible chapter 5 . 8/5/2008
I love this story D

Only thing to say is that some of your people-meeting-naruto scenes got a little repetitive. Hope life gets/stays good fo ya!


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Firecanburn chapter 4 . 7/30/2008
Brilliant story :)
postaled chapter 5 . 7/28/2008
For some reason after I read what you have done so far with your story I was picturing something with Temari going to visit the Fire Temple and knowing that she had an arranged marriage with someone there, but never told what the boys name is, so she could have narrowed it down to a few of Naruto & friends. She would do this and then start falling for Naruto but would be nervous to eventually find out who her husband would be. Not sure, just a crazy idea.
JamesRKS chapter 5 . 7/28/2008
Hey trust me I know exactly what U mean. Right now I'm having really bad writers block. If i think of anything I'll PM U K.
Darksnider05 chapter 5 . 7/28/2008
Arg can't wait for next chapter I was all excited
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