Reviews for Exposure
shatteredddddd chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Oh Ed, you... you... PERVERT!
jklghjmghhjughmdtghfj chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
ultra funy ending!
Cerulean San chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Hilarious! I was wondering when someone would make a fic off of that scene!

“…f-f-five…wrench…b-blows a-and…a s-stab in…the eye…I got a bargain…”

Best. line. ever. Oh Edward. xD

Ed was *so* wanting to see her naked. I mean, he saw her entering the house through her window.

He knew she'd be coming, so the excuse "He was just shocked" doens't work as well. Really, he could have said anything in between the time she entered to right before she began to undress.

We're on to you Edward. *Shifty eyes*
Miss Woodford chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I think Ed would be more likely to start drooling uncontrollably; causing Winry to slip and fall while advancing upon him with intent to commit grievous bodily harm. Her wrench would go flying and hit her on the head with enough force to stun her and she'd wake up in the arms of an anxious Edward. Who would kiss her to prevent any repetition of yelling. The results would become a hentai doujin.
CreativebutLazy chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
ch 84 is out? OMG I have to read it.

that was funny, Winry should be more alert of her surroundings next time.
ElricKeyblade chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
*laughs* heh, I was wondering how long a fanfic like this would take to come out after THAT scene in the new chapter! I was wondering what would have happened if she did take off her whole shirt too! :P Great job with this! I totally cracked up! XP