Reviews for Forgive Me, For I Have Sinned
spontaneous chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I'm not exactly sure what her epiphany was about but i do like the idea of this story. Maybe you could add a little more detail.
IcelandGirl812 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Hm, I'm not sure what to say...I'm not sure what I think about it...
Mrs.Gubler chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I really liked this! It was really good!
actions-we-remember chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
You did a fantastic job with this! Polly isn't a character that we hear much of, but you did a phenominal job writing with what you had. The 20 years later bit was great, too. Fantastic story!
indiaga chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I think the idea of this is really good, but I think that perhaps there was too much speech. I don't think her feelings were explained casrefully enough, and I don't quite understand what her sudden epiphany was all about. I really do like the idea though, and I think that if you improved this and explored characterisation and maybe even presented more in a 'stream of conciousness' way then I think it could be brilliant.