Im loving tbe effort, the pacing, a bit extreme for cho being absolutely psycho. Im not feeling harry being a dumbass, but i suppose its more accurate to actual harry.

My blood, god blood, and sort of an uncle blood is great joke

5’8” bruh thats the height of freshman.

Emma being a wing mother in law

Your story is already exponentially better than the original

Thanks for writing. I’ve hit my limit with this story. If you are still writing, I hope you have learned from these efforts and found ways to improve.

Will anything of consequence actually happen in this fic?

Another one of these time traveling stories where Harry does virtually nothing to deal with any problems. Very odd choices by the author.

It’s one of those stories with the most annoying version of Hermione possible…..goody.

I am having trouble getting into this story. It starts out with some potential but then it gets weird real fast. Harry is oddly passive and even though he seems to be very powerful and smart AND he has knowledge of the future, he’s not being proactive and I am just annoyed. I can’t keep reading.

You clearly are not aware of how small scotland is, 100 km all around the school is impossible

I’ve asked this before and I will continue to,WHAT were you drinking when you wrote these hilariously serious chapters. I

Out of friendly jesting I have a question, What were you drinking when you wrote this chapter? I loved it.

Hermione would be 13 at the start of 3rd year not 12

Just had an epiphany of a statement in an earlier chapter:
Your script indicated (if I undrstood it correctly) that Hermione owed RonW a life debt due to the troll incident.
I disagree based on the understanding that a life debt is owed when 1) the 'victim' is in mortal danger; 2) the rescuer puts his own life at risk to save the victim's life; and 3) the rescuer did not cause the situation in the first place.
The example to cite is when Snape went to expose Lupin as a werewolf. He was in mortal danger for his own selfish ends, but James prevented Snape from being killed/mauled by the werewolf. As James didn't instigate the event, and wasn't aware of it beforehand, Snape owed Potter a life debt.
Had it been Sirius Black who saved Snape, there would be no life debt because Black was the instigator.
Likewise, because RonW caused the behavior/actions that put Hermione in danger from the troll, even though RonW helped to disable the danger, he was only correcting the results of his poor behavior.