Reviews for Brewing More Than Truth
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Mor3 plz lol:D
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
great, i loved it!
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Lalalalaxx chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Wh-wha-what happened?

D: Update. I need to know what happens!

Oh, and, just so you know, when a people are in a conversation, when a different person speaks, it's a new paragraph.

Example:

Incorrect:

“Yes it does. Clever.” “Am I brewing the whole thing sir?” “Yes you are.” Hermione gritted her teeth. “For being right?” Snape stood quickly like a cobra about to strike. “For being a know it all, and if I were you I’d keep my temper Granger!”

Correct:

“Yes it does. Clever.”

“Am I brewing the whole thing sir?”

“Yes you are.”

Hermione gritted her teeth. “For being right?”

Snape stood quickly like a cobra about to strike. “For being a know it all, and if I were you I’d keep my temper Granger!”

Hope that helped! Update soon, please. :]
DanniV chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
gotta love that truth potion keep up the good work!
Eusebius chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Quite good. Will this be a chaptered fic? There were just a couple of grammatical errors, but I thought the flow was pretty good, and I really liked your characterization of Snape. He might be on the good side, but he's still an ass.
passion and love chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
wow, i like the plot. i hope there will be more!
catysmom chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I like it. Please update soon.
Gnarly Sensations chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Your paragraphs aren't correct, but it was a good story. Very annoying to read though.