|Reviews for Falling: The Cut Scenes|
| Electricboa chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
I can see why you needed to separate this from the other story to keep it a T rating, but it was good of you to post this for those of us who want the fuller version of the scenes.
| annalise chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
| annalise chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
| Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
love it it's hot and spicy.
| Ayake Rin chapter 3 . 11/1/2010
Aw man i loved this! xD I'm definitely giong to have to g and read the story you exerpted this from! I really want to read the end and the explaination for everything in particular. I loved Ravens final line, very sweet and just enough of her to fit in character. Perfect job, I really, truly think you have made a most brilliant gift to all of the fans of this show, this pairing, and readers ingeneral.
This realy is very well written, and I hope to read more from you soon. :)
| Lana chapter 3 . 7/22/2008
wow...just just wow...*takes notes* ahaha just kidding _ *hides notebook* that was a totally different experience then the other version im really glad you put both and up damn girl! no wonder you were worried about the rating...
| AudiGirl chapter 3 . 7/12/2008
the original story just wasnt complete without the cut out parts
| Brazilian Star chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
I enjoyed the cut scenes, and yeah, I've read the chapter 29 by here, of course.
You did a good job, very detailed.
Do you think that there are still more cut scenes? I think that it might be one last one of chapter 20.
Anyway, congrats again.
| With Closed Eyes chapter 3 . 6/26/2008
kute! well done x3
luv it ! )
oh andd abt speedy?
ther isnt gunna be drama with him right? thtd relly suck hes suppose to be their friend (
chapters really cute cant wait til the t rated one befr this one (?) is postd
ill def review )
| tennisgal456 chapter 3 . 6/24/2008
ok so i understand that this is the chapter with the new details, but instead of reading the parts i already have, i am just going to skim until i reach new parts of the chapter and review those
ok i HAD to read the keepaway part again, it was priceless
wow this version really went into the depths of the sex scenes
it certainly helped to create a more vivid picture
so i know i didnt realize it before, but raven sort of had her climax with her powers as well
awesome, both ways you wrote it
keep it up
cant wait for the sequel!
| tennisgal456 chapter 2 . 6/24/2008
get into robins head more? i dont know thats pretty risky, considering how difficult it would be to find our way back out!lol
i always wondered how bb slept in animal form, i thought it took concentration to hold his animal form, and he cant do that while sleeping
lilting? ive never heard of that word
what an in-depth goodnight kiss run amok!hehe
man i forgot what bad timing cy had in that scene, lol ah well
keep it up
| tennisgal456 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
well i think this is a great way to show what you chose to leave out, without making others not be able to finish the story (sorry if that made absolutely no sense)
wowee what a way to wake up, im sure she loved that
oh come on star, robin wants you, you can always buy a new, maybe even silk, sleepshirt
aww so robin decided to initiate the process because he had a dream, that is pretty awesome of him
huh so i really like the views you showed of the ideas of contraceptions from both planets
well that was a very benedicial talk
keep it up
| ChristeenieWeenie chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
great chapter! I couldn't stop lefting because to me i find it funny it's so awkward. i am so excited to read the next chapter _
| Eve Royal chapter 3 . 6/15/2008
Ah! The steamy fluff! IT BURNS!
Yay! Happy days! Let it never be said that... um... Shoot! Lost my train of thought!
Anyways, it was awesome! Yay, Star/Robin!
| The Red Rawr chapter 3 . 6/14/2008
Quote: "it was as though his entire body were trying to force itself out through his groin."
bwahahahahahaahah. Honey, that completely ruined the buzz. I don't know ANY guy that would describe orgasms like that.
Seriously, I am rawring with laughter.
-The Red Rawr