Reviews for Another collection
mgsab123 chapter 6 . 2/6/2009
Not bad
mgsab123 chapter 5 . 2/6/2009
mgsab123 chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
This is my fav. so far, i really liked it
mgsab123 chapter 3 . 2/6/2009
Hm not bad, but not the best
mgsab123 chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
Aw i like it
mgsab123 chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
All it needed was a bit more inbetween the "She loves you" and the "I hate you"
Wild Grasses chapter 5 . 1/28/2009
This was lovely...But! You need to write ''yaoi'', i am assuming you know what yaoi is lol. For example, write some SasuNaru stuff! lol i'm only kidding, that stuff probably freaks you out. But it's something to think about; it's only writing right? Reply!
Wild Grasses chapter 4 . 1/28/2009
I loved this one; the variety of sentence length especially, made it seem like a real poem. I like how you are writing many poems from diffeent points of view! keep it up!
Wild Grasses chapter 3 . 1/28/2009
Aw...this one made me sad! i DON'T LIKE A GRUMPY SASUKE! (Apart from when he's getting no s-e-x lol. But still nice nonetheless.
Wild Grasses chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Again, well crafted and a nice image was portrayed.
Wild Grasses chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I usually just read yaoi but this was good; very good. A nice ending and well crafted.
totaltheTERRIER chapter 3 . 1/1/2009
ur poems r rely good! dont b discouraged!
HoliMoliCow chapter 3 . 6/15/2008

new poem!

oh...its sad... -sob-

poor sakura and naruto, and sasuke ... they're ALL victims!

-sob whimper sniffle-
HoliMoliCow chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
lovin these poems...

im gonna add this to alert, incase you write more...

are you?

hope so!
lustofficial chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I bet thats what naruto thinks