Reviews for Ready to Jump
Alxiea chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Hey, i totally love father daughter concept, but i feel like there needs to be more scenery details, as well as physical descriptions, and don't forget to put up your disclaimer remarks, but other than that i would love to read more!
Cogan chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
this kinda makes me wanna cry. pouts I really wanna know what happens next!
Riddicks-gurl1988 chapter 2 . 1/29/2009
I like it...I always knew that if Riddick had kids they'd be Bad Asses like him...Can't wait for the update
Aag ki Rani chapter 2 . 9/6/2008
hey great story! so want to read more! can u please update asap! THANKS!
AZTECPHENOM chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
i like it so far, are you going to follow the movie line or do your own thing?
Saismaat chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
Interesting job of playing with the whole . . . family drama that they set up with Jack and Riddick having a sibling-esque relationship in the first movie and then not so much with the second. At least, I think that’s what you’re going for, by putting Riddick’s “daughter” into the same place that his “younger sister”/”love interest” played. Be interested in how you play with that. I’m no fan of the OFC personally; but the particular substitution you have come with has potential. Good luck!
btstfn chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
that was more than a little reminiscent of the movie, but good writing, just try to write some more original stuff.