|Reviews for Forgotten|
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| deleteme.deleteme.deleteme chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
U should continue!
| fairiestails chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
| electrictwizist chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I like it
| Sunshine Ana Cloudyday chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Wow. Very good.
| PearlAngel16 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
I liked it,
| ForeverIndebted chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Wow. That is powerful. I love it. :)
| Twilight11addict chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I was crying.
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
That was terrific! I'm am almost annoyed, though, because I literally just yesterday had the idea for a similar storyy - Alice's time in the asylum. But, alas, you got there first and I am actually releived. I have a habit of ruining things. You are going to continue this, right? I love it (and it's not even past chapter one yet) so I really hope you keep going. You write spectacularly and I could not have done better at all (once again, thank you for getting there first!) so please don't make me wait too long for the next bit!
One last note: I can really imagine ALice writing this - your characterisation was perfect.
| oXXb00kw0rmXXo chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Oh my god, this is amazing! I love it, I really do. Please write more! Maybe you could have Bella before/after she becomes a vampire, or Jake before he leaves. Or Elizabeth's death wish or or or... well, whatever you want! But it's amazing!
| dark-angels-who-eat-cookies chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Love the quote! And the letter! Please write more! MORE!