Reviews for Wishes
1337kitsune chapter 16 . 2/15/2011
Friends. Definitly friends. Also, if you don't finish this or at least update I'm gonna kick your ass. This is too good not to finish. So... yeah... Update by Friday or ass-kicking is gonna be free and deadly.

Thank you!
thraxbaby chapter 16 . 10/9/2010
Oooooh! Can't wait for more!
unknown20troper chapter 16 . 8/31/2010
Awesome!

All the characters are in character. Redd's name "stuck back in Vietnam" comment was hilarious! The "Redd Kross" one also was. As always, the OCs are well-written. Norm's dream seems to be full of symbolism. Norm's character development is progressing really well.

Great chapter!

Great story!
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2010
YAY! An update!Please keep it coming! Just one request: PLEASE keep everyone true to their character.
Rotella chapter 15 . 3/21/2010
This fic is awesome! Your OCs are brilliant, and Norm's completely in character. Can you please, please update soon!
xxx-Vitani-xxx chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
Nice story so far. :) I always enjoy stories with Norm in it.

Amanda has a very intresting character and behavior.

Can't wait to read more.

Do I have to say something else? oh yeah.. Update please ;)
Futuramakid chapter 15 . 8/26/2009
VERY nice, one of the very few stories I've read with an OC main cast that I enjoyed. Amanda's well-written and compelling, and you actually got me sympathizing with Norm- no small task, thought I didn't outright hate him before.
unknown20troper chapter 15 . 6/21/2009
I read your profile and then decided to see what edits you meant. You seemed to have taken most of the reviews into account, and added some new dialogue and description.

I like how Norm can both rescue someone and mentally call them "miss emotional", which you maybe should have capitalized. Nice how you mentioned Studwell's glasses trick. The bazooka was definitely FOP-style. I really like how Norm thought her jokes were bad. That definitely is IC for Norm.

Also, I need to tell you that recommended stories aren't posted at TVTropes. Links to the recommended fics are posted at TVTropes, along with a summary, pairing(s) (if there are any), author name, recommender name, and comments.

Cool avatar.

Just so you know, there is a forum called "Fanfic Promotion" on FOP's forum board, and maybe you should promote it there instead. You did a good job promoting it though. Too bad that we weren't fans in the great Norm fan boom of 2005-06.

I assume if you are half-way through, it'll have 28-30 chapters when finished. Cool!

I suppose you've been on TVTropes. Did you like it there?

I am very glad that you thank me a lot. I certainly never expected that.

Great fanfics!
unknown20troper chapter 14 . 6/16/2009
I saw that you had updated and was very excited. I expected a new chapter and was disappointed not to find one so I checked to see if you had replaced your Ch. 15 with another Ch.15, just like you did with Ch. 12 (because I figured that was one probable cause of this fanfic being updated). However, you hadn't. So, I checked out several other chapters, expecting to find that you had fixed your spelling and grammar mistakes. However, you hadn't. Then I happened upon this chapter and saw that you had added an EDIT saying that your animation had won first in the state and that you wanted a prize. Hooray for you! However, this type of thing could get ranted about on fanficrants, if anyone felt suitably inclined. Updates should be chapters, not tiny weenie EDITs announcing that you won something.

Good story (and update soon, in the correct sense of the word)!
Roflroflrofl chapter 15 . 6/10/2009
I only found out about this fanfic because I saw a great quote on tvtropes about it.

Needless to say this is pure awesome, thank you so much for writing.
cannondomshakecrak chapter 15 . 6/7/2009
I like this story, and can you please U-P-D-A-T-E! You are almost on p. 2 of the archive. If someone posts another fic, you will be on p. 2.
JORGEN VON STRANGLE chapter 15 . 5/27/2009
I JORGEN VON-STRANGLE WISH YOU, PUNY HUMAN TEEN, TO WRITE MORE...NOW!
The Man Who Can't Be Moved chapter 15 . 5/23/2009
Till you update! This is great story and I love your characterization of your OCs. You characterize them so well, that you might be able to write a story with only OCs.

Going back to the corner where I first read Wishes,

Gonna camp in my sleeping bag I'm not gonna move,

Got some words on cardboard got your fanfic on my screen,

Saying if you see this fanfic can you tell her where I am,

Some try to hand me money they don't understand,

I'm not...broke I'm just a waiting-for-updates man,

I know it makes no sense, but what else can I do,

How can I move on when I still love your fanfic...

Cos if one day you wake up and find that Wishes updates,

And your stats start to wonder where on this earth I can be,

Thinking maybe Wishes would update in 2009,

And you'd see me waiting for an update on the corner of the street.

So I'm not moving...

I'm not moving.

Policeman says son you can't stay here,

I said there's an update I'm waiting for if it's a day, a month, a year,

Gotta stand my ground even if it rains or snows,

If she updates her fanfic this is the first place it will go.

Cos if one day you wake up and find that Wishes updated,

And your stats start to wonder where on this earth I can be,

Thinking maybe Wishes would update in 2009,

And you'd see me waiting for Wishes to update.

So I'm not moving...

I'm not moving.

I'm not moving...

I'm not moving.

People talk about the guy

Who's waiting on a fanfic...

Oohoohwoo

There are no holes in his shoes

But a big hole in his world...

Hm

and maybe I'll get famous as man who can't be moved,

And maybe your stats won't mean to but you'll see me on your stats,

And you'll update Wishes...

Cos you'll know it's just 'cause I love your fanfic

I'm the man who can't be moved

I'm the man who can't be moved...

Cos if one day you wake up and find that you want to update Wishes,

And your stats start to wonder where on this earth I can be,

Thinking maybe you'll update Wishes,

And you'd see me waiting for you on the corner of the street.

[Repeat in background]

So I'm not moving...

I'm not moving.

I'm not moving...

I'm not moving.

Going back to the corner where I first read Wishes,

Gonna camp in my sleeping bag not I'm not gonna move.

Update soon please!
Everyone Hates the Banjo chapter 15 . 5/23/2009
Can you please update?

I really like this story. The flashback was great, and yep I miss Norm the swinging G-E-N-I-E!

Great story!
A R I S T 0 Crat I chapter 15 . 5/23/2009
Great story!

You have a good OC, and I loved this chapter even if it contained no Norm. It also contained no spelling mistakes (or I'm not in the mood to check). Luckily, I'm sure that Norm doesn't cause spelling mistakes.

I'd liked the flashback.

You are good at characterization.

Amanda has great snark.

Beach bums that hit on you probably aren't great friends, though Amanda might naively think that even Voldemort is great friend as long as he doesn't hurt anyone other than her.

Please update!
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