Reviews for A Different Fate
Guest chapter 5 . 8/8
I feel sorry for all fanfic authors whose school has disrupted their writing.
Proudly Slythrin chapter 11 . 7/21
JUST CURSE THEM ALREADY ANA!
TPT chapter 12 . 6/30
I'm sorry to say, but your grammar is shit and the story gets too boring in places. You could improve this by not describing everything. But this is my fourth time trying to read the story and it is very hard to not stop reading due to the grammar. Otherwise the story is good,
Kris chapter 24 . 5/12
I was wondering if you had a chance to work on the sequel? I noticed that it wasn't posted...
Guest chapter 9 . 4/3
I feel like you're ignoring Harry too much. It's all about Ana this and Ana that and how great Ana is. It doesn't really mention how good Harry is or what he is doing.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18
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Gleas chapter 21 . 11/13/2015
You have a great story line but I must point out that you spend inordinate amounts of words on describing various things... the grounds, the pets, the layout of a shopping district... not all of it is even relevant and some is even repetitive.

The real plot is moving too slowly in small snippets amidst a lot of non-plot related information. Sure water dragons are interesting but what do they have to do with the story. Draco is rich and owns some place, whatever, so what? These things can be mentioned in passing without spending paragraphs to describe them. It makes one feel bored and the excitement of the rather fabulous plot is gone.
Le chapter 23 . 11/5/2015
What happened to the sequel?
EvilDime chapter 10 . 10/18/2015
Good God back to third person POV
EvilDime chapter 8 . 10/18/2015
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booklover19a chapter 24 . 10/4/2015
This is such an awesome idea! Although I know it's been years since you've updated, I would love to read more! I really want to know all about their Hogwarts years as well as the Wizarding war! I can't find the sequel! Could you link me to it?

Thanks, and keep writing!
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 7 . 8/31/2015
You are too fond of the scumbag Malfoys.
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 5 . 8/31/2015
Ana is your creation. You are responsible for her. If she is not memorable, then it is only your fault.
Julian Fireson chapter 15 . 5/18/2015
I am your... 307th reviewer! Happy? Well, this is a hate comment. JUST JOKING sorry, man, just couldn't resist. So, this is how my friends greet me: "Hey, Julian!" or "Yo, what's up, man?" or "Hey dude!" or "Hey" or just a knuckle punch. Dude, I like your books. Not as much as I like to score with hot babes, but I like your books. They're 'mazing! Butt, LOL, but, dude, you have to admit, when you wrote the links, WHY ON EARTH DID YOU ADD SPACES! And, it's two slashes at the beginning, you know, with , it's two slashes, not one.
hermionelovegood36 chapter 5 . 4/9/2015
Love Ana! also like the muggle weapons idea!
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