Reviews for Under The Table
Syaoran Li Clow chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
The White Devil is scary.

Mistress Nanoha can’t stand someone else taking her possessions, in this case, Fate. Oh yeah, we need to know what kind of punishment Fate will receive for cheating on Nanoha (I’m sure that she’ll enjoy that anyway). The only think that can make all this more priceless is that Hayate-chan has everything recorded with the security cameras at the Riot Six facilities and then use it as blackmail with Signum.

I’ll looking forward for more chapters to come.
handlewithcare chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Nice... ROFLMAO. You almost kill me there. lololol.

Get your own blonde! Seriously dude, that is made of win and gold.

Keep on writing. I'd love to read more from you.
bluebendystraw chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
that was so FUNNY! awesome! i'm can't stop laughing! great! that was priceless! as much as i love a cool fate, i love her more when she's embarrassed and flustered! XD

"GET YOUR OWN BLONDE!" - nanoha is awesome! poor signum, she got breaker'd. _
suppressed.depression chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Awesome stuff. It made my night so much better! Please update!
Nictory chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Poor, Poor Fate. And not to mention poor Signum will get all star light brake'd. hahaha Very nice chapter. You have to continue it. I want to know what happens next.
markesellus chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
This was great! I'm crying from laughter. Signum teasing Fate. And Nanoha's line of "get your own blonde" was the best! So much teaching and learning involved in this chapter. ;D
Black-Wolf-Ninja chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Hehe, nice, you always have to end with the starlight breaker XD

Very nice teasing chapter, Signum was good with the teasing turning into a challenge side. It definately seems like something she would do. Too prideful to ask directly XD

lol "need to learn how to grope" had me in fits!

Good job! :D:D:D

TweekinTinkaToy chapter 2 . 6/18/2008
OMG! I was laughing so hard during all of it! Fate giving Signum tips on sex? Freaking hilarious! And then a super submissive Fate with an extremely possessive Nanoha at the end complete with Starlight Breaker action? It doesn't get any better than this! I wanna read more!
hoppingdimsum chapter 2 . 6/18/2008

Signum is such a badass.

Oh how I wish to see Shamal's reaction once Signum 'performs' what she'd learned

Love the story
IceN chapter 2 . 6/18/2008
Dear god, I was laughing so hard while reading this chapter, my parents came in my room and asked me if I was alright. XD

I want moar D: lol
TweekinTinkaToy chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
That was so perfect! Hahahahaha! Oh Nanoha, you do such wonderfully evil things to our Fate-chan!
Kitematsu chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
That was hot telepathy man. tsk tsk nanoha, that naughty thing. :P lets just say that fate's so-called innocence in this chapter was way to cute. well done for this chapter. awesome plot you have there. do continue yea :D
throwing-dynamite chapter 1 . 6/18/2008

O_O...HAHAHAHA! this was great! it was short, funny and...oh so sensual w I congradulate thee! it was AWESOME!

*waves pompoms at you*

hehehe I wish I could have telepathic communications! and I love Nanoha's dirty mind. awesome job again!
LowFlyer1080 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
The White Devil strikes again! Muwahahahahaha! I love this fic!
person chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
HAHA okay that was seriously damn cool and FUNNY. you should write more like that! :D

and i liked the way you ended it! "gone for a long, long time". goodness knows what they're doing, really cute! xD
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