Reviews for Everything that I am
hikora chapter 1 . 7/16
HOT! Sasuke's so cute! XD Could you please please please continue this story, or make a sequel of it?
Lady Spain chapter 1 . 2/16
That was hot. i like the plot. Make a sequel?
Tblu2326 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Just because it wasn't by Naruto's hand doesn't mean his soldiers couldn't have slaughtered them all the same.
Nautical.Empress chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
_ I love these types of stories cuz they rock my world. XD Everyone already said it was a hot, steamy, story so I'll say that you wrote it wonderfully and you only had that one spelling mistake, either way, I thought it was an awesome story!
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Oh My God, That Was Fucking HAWT, I Mean It. And I Haven't Said Hawt In, Like, A Year. I Want Naruto To Molest Me Like That, _Fans Self_ Fabulous Job.

YYWKMN.
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
/ I just love reading your work!
Jd-dox chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Okay, this is the part that totally blew my brains out: "You like that, don't you? I bet you love the way my cook feels within you... I wish you could see what I do, how my cook disappears inside your ass". Cook! WTF! The rest of it, fantastic, you actually managed to make the war sound interesting3 Though didn't the soldiers OUTSIDE of the tent hear what was going on INSIDE the tent? It's really bugging me.
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Hot and original. That's all I can manage. Sorry, I wanted to give you a better review, but my mind has gone to mush.
NellaReklaw08 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
cool story!i like how u added history into it without making it boring (sorry, i hate history) but this was seriously nosebleed worthy! *screams* great job XP
The Group of One chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Two words: Oh baby! ;D

I love how accurate (Romans being open to male/male relationships), yet inaccurate (Japanese names) this is. Truely brilliant.

I'm going to go have a cold shower now.
Chadyz chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
In one word..Whoa!

Hell if that wasn't hot!
Guardian of the Hell Gate chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Yeah this right here was pure deliciousness. however at the end you know you wrote "cook" instead of "cock", right? I didn't realize it until now, just wanted you to know.
arenha chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Too bad there isn't more chapters. XD I really liked your story and plot! Never read one like it before-Sasuke willing sacrificing himself for his people. It was so hawt! (But also cute in it's twisted way!) XD

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moopad chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
:D :D :D

it is so steamy, isn't it?

and soo well written

thanx

NaruSasu here is sexy
Narulov56 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
i should stop drooling over my laptop but god this is to damn sexy!drool's more

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(*.*)hope you like my bunny!is my gift for such a good lemon!
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