|Reviews for Broken Realities|
| Musleblast chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
GET MORE CHAPTERS UP ALLREADY!
| Frozen Twins chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Alright, you'll get reviews from how great you're story is from every body else.
Betamon X: So we're gonna skip the praising you about this and that and say you just downright suck.
Gomamon: (Slaps forhead) We're just going to give him critism.
Lucas: But... one thing for praise. GO DIGI-CURSING.
Betamon X: Yes! 8 points for Crazyeight.
Alright, the first thing is that I had a real hard time keeping my attention. There were parts that seemed extenous and unneeded. I felt like a lot of it was excessed. You could have toned down the past explaination a bit. It just couldn't hold my attention. The mirror part was interesting for a second, but still I couldn't really get into this story. It was hard to not only keep up with anything, but it wasn't entertaining at all.
| Blazing Chaos chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
The differences between this and the original version of this chapter are very interesting. I didn't realise this was set before 02 and Frontier but after 01 and Tamers.
I love the elegant simplicity of a broken mirror as a plot device. It is such a small, near insignificant concept, but at the same time it is a rather haunting one, particularly given what the mirror previously showed. Very deep.
Anyhow, keep on writing, I'm very keen to see where this is all going.
| Twilight Archangel chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Interesting, I don't know why but this was easier to read than the first edit. Great work!