Reviews for Pickup Lines
duchesscarml chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Too cute! Lol
KaitouKage chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
That was just adorable, I almost started crying...

Nice work
love-peace-music chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
do you ever wonder when you read 'lol' in like a text or an email if the person really did laugh out loud? well i wonder that all the time, but i assure you that i really did laugh...out loud. :) very cute
tama is kakashi's girl chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
no your wrong! DAT WAZ AWESOME! i loved it...
burned out from exhaustion chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Ah, it was cute _
xxunrealisticxxdreamerxx chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
live4him4eva chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Hehe, pretty funny. Though I'm not a yaoi fan, so that part was kinda overlooked by me. Anyway, I just wanted to say two (gag) pickup lines I love: "If I flip a coin, what are my chances of getting head?" and "Do you believe men think with their groin? Then would you blow my mind?" Lame lols. :3
bghnbghn chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
hee! that made me giggle!
AliceWhitlock5 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
nice! very funny, i enjoyed it. i think this story had more rants than any other one i've read! hehe _
WaiiKitsune chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
No, it does not suck! It's really cute! Well, and sneaky, of Edward, I mean. *laughs*

marissa chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
so hilarious and sweet

Roy thought that Ed called him a girl but that was the only way that he could ask for advice without looking stupid or out of place
thara chapter 1 . 6/16/2008

TaiKaze chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
man that was cute! X3