Reviews for Eye for an Eye
dreamersrequiem chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
An interesting start. The only things I could pinpoint that you might want to look over are the things like the speech - because you've written it in a fairly formal way, like “So you have been spying on us?” rather than you've. As well as that, just one error in using the name 'Miss Kent'. Lana is Lana Lang, unless she's married to Clark here in which case it'd be Mrs Kent.
Jeremy Shane chapter 14 . 11/10/2008
good story
Jeremy Shane chapter 13 . 11/4/2008
good chapter & more please
DarkRose2006 chapter 12 . 11/2/2008
Thanks for the update! It was good. The thing I am not a fan of is everyone having feelings for Clark...I don't know, it just rubs me slightly the wrong way, but that won't stop me from reading, I do want to know what happens next. Update again soon when you get the chance!
Jeremy Shane chapter 12 . 11/2/2008
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 11 . 10/12/2008
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 10 . 9/24/2008
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 9 . 9/15/2008
good chapter & more please
red chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
keep it up bro cant wait 2 read more
Jeremy Shane chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 6 . 9/5/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
BTW It's Jor-el.

good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 9/5/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
good chapter
Marth HEART Smallville chapter 7 . 9/4/2008
What the. . . oh man, this is confusing. . .
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