Reviews for his daughter
XMelvdsX chapter 3 . 6/18/2008
Okay, so I hate writing negative reviews but still

1) It's TARDIS not TARDUS

2) The Doctor's daughter's named Jenny!

At least you could've looked it up.
Latraya chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
seriously this was incomprehensible, and its spelled TARDIS, the subject could be rather interesting but it was just painful to read. You need to work on work on your grammar - It could be good.
Yunagirlamy chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
WHAT the hell did I just read? That was crap beyond all belief, and YES, this IS a flame.

YGA

P.S, I HATE SUBMITTING FLAMES, AND I'M REPORTING YOU
Steven Carnell chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
Good idea, pity about the errors. The most glaring one is the spelling of TARDIS. (NOT TARDUS) I'd encourage you to keep working on your skills. 5/10.
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