|Reviews for his daughter|
| Yunagirlamy chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
You won't write if I report you.
So I'm gonna give you two options:
1. You can take my offer to help you
2. You can ignore me, and then I'll report you for bad grammer and so.
I think I know which one I'd chose.
| XMelvdsX chapter 3 . 6/18/2008
Okay, so I hate writing negative reviews but still
1) It's TARDIS not TARDUS
2) The Doctor's daughter's named Jenny!
At least you could've looked it up.
| Latraya chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
seriously this was incomprehensible, and its spelled TARDIS, the subject could be rather interesting but it was just painful to read. You need to work on work on your grammar - It could be good.
| Yunagirlamy chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
WHAT the hell did I just read? That was crap beyond all belief, and YES, this IS a flame.
P.S, I HATE SUBMITTING FLAMES, AND I'M REPORTING YOU
| Steven Carnell chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
Good idea, pity about the errors. The most glaring one is the spelling of TARDIS. (NOT TARDUS) I'd encourage you to keep working on your skills. 5/10.